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Jan 17, 2015
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Of Happiness
Of Happiness
I have all along been sitting and glossing
under an apple tree
all my life
what happiness can be
a simple comparison of combined incidents
some happy
some sorry
and
from the milk of both
if you can but extract
the elixir of happiness
twill a successful story be
of what happiness tis
your poetry lends happiness to me
but let me be happy
and
so end here my story
one must simply be just happy!
— lovedly, Jan 17, 2015
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
wesley snow
11 years 4 months ago
Just happy
is hard. Good poem kid.
lovedly
11 years 4 months ago
thank you so much Snow man
with Love from kid
loved and lovedly one
like a son eh!
alidzain
11 years 4 months ago
Hi loved
another good one.
Alid
mand
11 years 4 months ago
Yes
I agree, good poem!
Love Mand xxx
lovedly
4 years 6 months ago
NEWER GENERATION MUST
KNOW
What Happiness is
my four happy poems read one by one please