marvelous just marvy.....on joining a workshop

marvelous just marvy

Neopoets I shall join,
from an outstanding players
point of view
shall enter and see
what loved can do

I walk an isolated path yes
but success I can never beget
as Loved lives in this skin
misunderstood mostly

But I shall now begin
and
participate through thick and thin
just let me join in

Here I send my inner voice
to speak aloud
and hope you will not shout
again
my way

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

swikmiller

11 years 1 month ago

loved

one fantastic poem and incredibly well-crafted. your changes in verb tense are spot-on and effective. your ability to write this great cry of self, sans punctuation -- I admire that!

lovedly

11 years 1 month ago

Thank you friend

I read yours maiden this morning I think

Now I have also taken the dramatic challenge
of Snowmans workshop
and have just now
posted my maiden contribution

.The punctuation ignored here were just by accident,
though as a poet I don't pay much attention
to either grammar or punctuation

Poetry is different to prose.
sans all but emotion
an innate creation
not by articulation ..

My opinion only
as I have been composing ///since past six decades

Many don't know here
what is a ''''decade''
mostly /many
still consider me
soil worth just a spade....
hope you won't
with your experience..

mand

11 years 1 month ago

Yeh!

Brilliant poem! - you hit the jackpot. Great that you've joined a workshop! :) :)

Go for it!

Love Mand xxx

lovedly

11 years 1 month ago

your and Ians hammer worked

I have already posted in SNOWMAN'S workshop
do read
and guide ...help with any corrections
u feel
thanks in advance