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May 30, 2014
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Point of View
I stood there with you
Looking out of your window
It was bright for me
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Points of view (Senyru) for those hat only see the dark out there..
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
weirdelf
11 years 10 months ago
suberb senryu
it was bright for me too.
Ian.T
11 years 10 months ago
Jess
That the view from your window was bright was good for me to hear, take care young traveller,
Yours Ian.T
Emina Smajevic
11 years 10 months ago
so so good :))
so so good :))
Ian.T
11 years 10 months ago
Emina
Never let others darken your view, thanks for your visit,
Yours as always Ian.T