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raj

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excuse me...i faced formatting probles..i shall repost

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

mona

mona

14 years 10 months ago

Happy New Year Raj!

Fabulous my dear
Very new to me such style of writing '' not the form''.
and amazed me too

R

raj

14 years 10 months ago

Dear Mona

i just posted the corrected version "The Call"....

Happy New Year to you and your beloveds..