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Apr 30, 2013
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vangaurdian
hunger realms
a trickle wind
displace me soul
the darkness grows
stretched like a shadow
curious
the muses frolicked
drawing wealth
from pleasures cup
the garden stars emerge
to cut the dreams
imagination cries out
in her hour
searching for binary
causes
revolutionary
pauses
— Esker, Apr 30, 2013
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Geezer
13 years 1 month ago
What a great way to...
describe the process of creativity! Nice!
"displace me soul
the darkness grows
stretched like a shadow
curious" - My favorite lines ~ Gee
ida
13 years 1 month ago
food of
birth death
all that lays between
minds eye sweeps
the refuse and the clean
I love this poem esker
the muses frolicked
drawing wealth
from pleasures cup
brilliant
Esker
13 years 1 month ago
creativity........
I remember cleaning springs in small communities
historical oddities....no one used them much
depending on the factory water drilled plants...
But I loved them.....clarity
quenching thirst be it for a dream
alms for sorrowful wounds
or refreshment
cycles interest my drives
lately I have been besieged
by the inundations of my own
doing.....
I love the moon stars...
wonders beyond man made
images on screens
Thanks for Reading!!
loved
13 years 1 month ago
extraordinary out from
the deepest of BLUES