in for repairs

— Bonitaj, Apr 15, 2013

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

Critiques

themoonman

13 years 1 month ago

Hi Bonnie,

in for repairs? I thought it to be a great title ... ain't we all in need for
some repairs.

Ian.T

13 years 1 month ago

Boni

You will have lots more comments after your repairs are completed.
What does a broken poet look like, better not say lol,
Will send you a thought checker it repairs broken thoughts, by getting rid of distractions.. I just go sit in my Cave lol,
Have a lovely mend,
Yours Ian.T