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BettyBuff
BettyBuff
Mar 22, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Ode To A Chip

It makes me salivate
those golden
crusty
morsels
on a plate

like golden embers
shiny
glistening
basted pleasure
remembered

carbo-licious
tasty treats
like
sticks of
fatty dynamite

crunch crunch
scoff scoff
the pig persona
plays a
Bacchanalian lunch

A chip! A chip!
My round plate
For a Chip!

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sheffield, ENGLAND

Favorite Poets: I don't respond to bullying, especially intellectual bullying.

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|BettyBuff

|BettyBuff

13 years 1 month ago

because...

I'd got enough devices in there to stand out..It's freeform...so it can do what it likes.....and frankly, was too busy eating the chips! :)))

brittle light

brittle light

13 years 1 month ago

sorry about interupting

with my interjection to frenchf. And so embarrasing if I'm wrong!

a fun piece, who doesn't like chips,. I'm american, we call them "french fries".... .........shortened these days to just "fries"

why bother to critique...fun just happens, it was fun. enough said

|BettyBuff

|BettyBuff

13 years 1 month ago

Hey...no problem

Thanks...yes...it alludes to Henry V...there are days when i'd give my worldly possessions up for some comfort hip-hugging chips (fries)!

Ells :)

Ian.T

Ian.T

13 years 1 month ago

Betty

Don't care what the rhyming is like first or last, an ode to the mighty Chip, other people throughout the world may call them by other names but they will still be as beautiful to me, a chip off the old block La La..
Yours Sparrow..