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musical prayers
Member since January 13, 2011
Member for 15 years, 4 months
Silent and Still
There are many notes on my heart
scars, gallops, and pain.
Like a metronome you bested me,
Now acapella is in my name.
Little did I know
that a year from now
I would be on stage
and you on the prowl.
Wrapping me in your arms
you forgot to let me breathe.
That manly scented body
turned to jealous greed.
I no longer taste your lips
Now the table holds your band
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we could not serve together,
So I no longer serve a man.
Window to my heart
was open for all to see,
what lies deep within,
access: only God and family.
musical prayers’s timeline
- January 2026
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13 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
- January 2021
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13 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2016
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13 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2012
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13 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2011
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03 WedReceived a critique
on Silent and Still from @Hooded Stranger
"MP, I am assuming you have contacted Andrew to see what can be retrieved from your previous profile on Neo before the crash? I hope you get it sorted - let me know if I can be of any help. regards, HS" -
02 TueReceived a critique
on Silent and Still from @Hooded Stranger
"MP, you comment says this isn't up for editing and you're done with posting on this site? So I wonder if it is worth me spending any time commenting on this one. I am left wondering why you posted it. Oh well, I'll move…" - July 2011
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29 Fri
- January 2011
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15 SatReceived a critique
on Innocence lost from @Eduardo Cruz
"Yes, that marvelous innocents, and now there so much truth in all we see that all we can do is hold on to things that first made us happy. not when youg but when we learn the truth of how we could servive it all. Living…" -
15 SatFirst publication
Innocence lost
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15 Sat
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15 SatFirst critique offered
on "WINTERS DAY" by @Eduardo Cruz
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13 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
About Me
I sing and have 4 CD's out with the choir, Much money made for freeing children sold into slavery. I love to be on stage singing, went from making CD's to making a movie, not out yet.
Single and love it that way. I have three children and 4 grandchildren, I am very kind yet very stubborn! I have bent with people and their opinions I no longer bend, I snap. I really do
not care what anyone thinks of me except my dear family whom I love and trust. Stubborn with them too.
Location: Michigan, USA
Songs of Solomon
do not read much poetry
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