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Mikeus Aurelius
Member since December 4, 2012
Member for 13 years, 6 months
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I Write Tonight
I write tonight
With tears on my face
For I'm alone again
Unwanted in this place
Plenty of faces to see
But none that looks back
My hearts red color
Is now fading to black
Wrinkling seas of thought
Flowing down to my lips
Like rivers banks
Holding oceans hips
Have shown my last moon
For when I awake
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The sun shining bright
Will seem so fake
I have no fuel for my fire
My life has lost it's spark
Numbed feelings and a shaded soul
Left me laying in the dark
Mikeus Aurelius’s timeline
- December 2022
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04 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2017
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04 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2013
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04 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2012
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18 TueReceived a critique
on I Write Tonight from @weirdelf
"I write tonight With tears on my face For I'm alone again Unwanted in this place [honestly,very emo and self-indulgent intro] Plenty of faces to see But none that looks back [look] My hearts red color Is now fading to b…" -
09 SunReceived a critique
on Like father, Like son from @Ian.T
"They are a two way street, they need your love and understanding as well as them giving their lives of love and understanding to their children. Sometimes the world is turned upside down as yours was. Then the strength…" -
09 SunReceived a critique
on I Write Tonight from @weirdelf
"listen to Richard, he gives good feedback. But honestly, this is self indulgent maudlin. Try writing about what is really bad, what affects you, what is wrong with the world, how to fix it, not just about yourself. I do…" -
05 Wed
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04 TueFirst publication
Like father, Like son
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04 Tue
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04 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: NY
Favorite Poets
Shakespeare
Dr. Suess
Tupac A. Shakur
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