medes879

Member since August 19, 2019

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Table Tock Talk

Posted Jan 13, 2020 · 44 lines

visions
of grandeur;
sift through the leaves
another girl of seven language
move the space with massive rejoice
lovers lift the Summer's weight

benefit with no regret
onto the marked kitchen store
faith that bleeds
a license to love insurance to hold

move out upon the withered Elms
linger..voiced bitter surprise;
laughter....
mister without a filter

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summoned a beacon fly remorse...

silence to the rescue
on a bitter table tock talk
hold me in my dreams I could believe;
neither death belief

charge with a middle grin smile
as you know for all the great while
believer the shore changed;
as quiet as your soul could be never doubt me

love in queen massive choice
throughout a bitter smile touched a long way before
shelter lay comfort onto its beckoning call;
the smell of vanity wait to letting go

beer belly engaged to stop the flow;
the music of "Sade"...parts are free
all that's a head of me
bring me home put my on a plate to send me out to sea

the door holds under the rest of pure....
combination, my tears of lost of years
never forget send me to slow torture;
build the fire to light the flame bring me home

visions again cause you know me better then that
after you arrive toward what you want
when you are on the outside baby looking in
I will find you as we bring you home....

you think I leave me the side baby;
after the tide pushes the wind quietly out to sea
lovers tend to look inner to help matter
through the years the sullen tears

here we go again counting to the number ten

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August 2024
19 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
September 2021
08 Wed

Received a critique
on We each can be a poet. Furthermore we have the spirit in all of us... True aura to self discovery from @Jackweb
"Very deep-rooted. Esoteric! Requires special knowledge to grasp this piece. but only creative minds. We each search for what allows from within, Base our existence from a door bell ring... It catch my attention very har…"
August 2020
19 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
February 2020
09 Sun

New follower
@Hannah Moonlark
January 2020
13 Mon

Posted a poem
Table Tock Talk
"visions"
Open thread 44 lines
04 Sat

Posted a poem
Kiss My Lips
"give way to fame"
Open thread 9 lines
December 2019
19 Thu

Received a critique
on The Raven from @vandiemenspeak
"Nevermore. Nicely assembled with allusions to that which *may be out of our reach, in that it's personal. Poe, as you know, was a perfectionist in form. A contemporary of Dickens? I think so. Translated by Baudelaire, c…"
18 Wed

Posted a poem
The Raven
"love is in the air"
Open thread 19 lines
November 2019
12 Tue

Received a critique
on Through The Ages from @Sparrow 42
"You are doing some of the things I have done such as the Muses and a verse for each Muse. Though you have listed all these statements in single line I would love to see a verse for as many of these lines as possible.. Y…"
12 Tue

Received a critique
on Safe From My Being from @Sparrow 42
"Whoops, this in its simplicity lost me in the understanding way. I couldn't seem to follow a story, Maybe I am getting old lol. Please could you just drop me a line on this one as I is lost, Yours Ian .."
October 2019
24 Thu

Posted a poem
Through The Ages
"find where the place of the father's gin"
Open thread 34 lines
22 Tue

Received a critique
on Whispers... from @Rottiestyl
"Hi, I read this twice and both times I feel the same thing. For me it bounces one one horrific thought to a serene one and back again. I see a horrendous nightmare. The person dreaming sees herself in the corner shootin…"
22 Tue

Posted a poem
Whispers...
"whispers..."
Open thread 37 lines
21 Mon

Critiqued
"A Short Walk. " by @Sparrow 42
"Very good job! This is short but to the point but I like that it doesn't say too much because it feels mysterious and it made me curious to discover my own interpretation and explore that with the imagery of those lines."
20 Sun

Critiqued
"A Short Walk. " by @Sparrow 42
"You have a very unique style in your piece you have keep up the good going..."
20 Sun

Posted a poem
Safe From My Being
"getting to the matter of fact"
Open thread 15 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
October 2019 — 7 poems
14 Mon

Critiqued
"Supersaturated" by @ThisIsMe
"Love the daring and jostling style of this piece. There is a healthy irreverence for semantics, diving straight into bold word crafting and spellings which force me to narrow and broaden my gaze one at and the same time…"
12 Sat

Critiqued
" The Demise Of A Witch (October Contest)" by @Patricia
"I have to limit the amount of time I spent on Social media but I, also mentor up and coming talent in private. I firmly believe in constructive criticism but see no point in being critical just for the sake of it. I jus…"
10 Thu

Critiqued
"Supersaturated" by @ThisIsMe
"you are loved even if it doesn't think like that..Build up on faith with Jesus he will never let you down...Prayer opens a new doorway opened by which to explore.. I went through episodes of depression that you wouldn't…"
10 Thu

Critiqued
"Peace at the River Bank " by @chima ononogbu
"Great title. What comes to my mind as an addendum, not that its needed, 'Grin and Bare'. But that's my title, not yours and it's a no-no, cliché. I love your message to the stouthearted. Fight, fight, til the end. Good…"
08 Tue

Posted a poem
Barren Leaves Coast To Cleave I
"shallow.."
Open thread 13 lines
07 Mon

Posted a poem
Love Was King
"Barren Leaves Coast To Cleave"
Open thread 9 lines
05 Sat

Posted a poem
Love Set Free
"Blood On The Marquee"
Open thread 34 lines
05 Sat

Received a critique
on One Of Those Holidays from @Sparrow 42
"This is a complex piece, It needs a few more words and a balance throughout. It lost me somewhere in the Rose- coloured bowl . Sorry I will wait to see if you are going to edit, Yours Ian"
01 Tue

Posted a poem
One Of Those Holidays
"Home for the holiday from New Orleans,"
Open thread 18 lines
September 2019
28 Sat

Received a critique
on Another Time Some Other Rhyme from @Eumolpus
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28 Sat

Received a critique
on Another Time Some Other Rhyme from @Eumolpus
"I would start with “drop a mouse...” I don’t think you need “I say” End with a period as the poem is punctuated. Lastly I would say “up a sleeve” as the more commonly understood image rather than in the sleeve Some sugg…"
27 Fri

Posted a poem
Another Time Some Other Rhyme
"I say drop a mouse into a poem"
Open thread 7 lines
22 Sun

Posted a poem
You Can Hear
"tonight you can heed to the bat of ill repute"
Open thread 24 lines
12 Thu

Critiqued
"Words.....Journey to Immortality" by @Feebie
"Beautiful picturesque scenery you have painted here with your words....And your last stanza summarizes it all...We see God's Divine Technology and Art set before us every day....live and in action....Beautiful birds...f…"
August 2019
26 Mon

Critiqued
"I Thought The Summer Was Young" by @Basya
"Really hits home to all unknown parts. Awake to the tenndency to dream to sing a tender song. As the tender lying of the fawn out on the lawm. Words that breath a nostalgic portion in its meaning. You have created a cha…"
20 Tue

First critique offered
on "Double Pugging The Shit..." by @Roscoe Lane
19 Mon

First publication
The Wedding Poem
19 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

Mario Vitale is a poet with over 1,000 poems towards his credit platform.
Mario Vitale was born in Bristol , Ct Has developed a skill for writing poetry in the free verse form. has been featured on Hubpages.com, Starlitecafe.com & Poetry soup. Vitale lives with his elderly mother Ann Soulier in Wolcott, Ct. Currently has written well over 1,000 poems & 2 short story's toward credit platform.

Vitale has hooked the poetic world by storm being featured on Google, Yahoo & MSN. Looks up to contemporaries in the poetry industry such as, “ John Ashbery & Major Jackson”.
Has been a favorite featured poet reader at Barnes & Noble in Waterbury, Ct.
Also featured on such sites as Poetry soup, Writer's café & Neo Poet.

Location: Wolcott, ct, USA

Favorite Poets

Major Jackson

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5 years of membership

on We each can be a poet. Furthermore we have the spirit in all of us... True aura to self discovery from @Jackweb

One year of membership

on The Raven from @vandiemenspeak

on Through The Ages from @Sparrow 42

on Safe From My Being from @Sparrow 42

on Whispers... from @Rottiestyl

"A Short Walk. " by @Sparrow 42

"A Short Walk. " by @Sparrow 42

October 2019 — 7 poems

"Supersaturated" by @ThisIsMe

" The Demise Of A Witch (October Contest)" by @Patricia

"Supersaturated" by @ThisIsMe

"Peace at the River Bank " by @chima ononogbu

on One Of Those Holidays from @Sparrow 42

on Another Time Some Other Rhyme from @Eumolpus

on Another Time Some Other Rhyme from @Eumolpus

"Words.....Journey to Immortality" by @Feebie

"I Thought The Summer Was Young" by @Basya

on "Double Pugging The Shit..." by @Roscoe Lane

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