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makelikeitall
Member since March 1, 2015
Member for 11 years, 3 months
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Intonation
I feel like an overflowing river,
streaming consciousness.
I feel like an instrument,
tuned to your pitch.
Drink me, play me;
here I am, waiting
in this eternity,
breathing integration
as a calibration
to the connection of our bodies.
We entertained close enough
for our stories to intertwine, now
unraveling one another
from the fabric
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floating again along the cosmos.
I tune into
this distant dance
surrendering me
to relax
from the acquiescence
of gentleness
upon smooth skin.
makelikeitall’s timeline
- March 2025
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01 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2020
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02 WedReceived a critique
on Intonation from @Geezer
"Something that makes us what we are. Creatures of the world, one with the universe. Your language is good and does not require me to go to the dictionary; which is always a bummer. It flowed well from beginning to end…" -
01 Tue
- March 2020
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01 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2016
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01 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2015
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01 SunFirst publication
goodevil (since unpublished)
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01 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I like mountains and energies and music.
I'm very self-aware, so maybe that's why I understand you so well.
Location: Bay Area, CA, USA
Favorite Poets
Rumi
Jane Roberts
Hafiz
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