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Lyric of Lynn
Member since October 25, 2019
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Empty Daze
I know right now when some times are down ah not so bad
I sit and wait oh for what I had
Speaks the same but I’m not always glad
I miss my place and all that it had
Empty Daze been gone by for what it was an who am I
when the stretch is far until the vineyard fruits are wine
There’s a new beginning an all that is mine
There’s a place for me when the East’s on fire
I knew left now all I’d of got I will have made some how
I stood to look as it has already hits the ground
Yells to me I’m to blame turns my only look to frowns
I wished this old seen would burn down
Empty Daze been gone by for what it was an who am I
when the stretch is far until the vineyard fruits are wine
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There’s a new beginning an all that is mine
There’s a place for me when the East’s on fire
I did not know what to think at the time about all this ah
I can not let go my mind to be disturbed
Subconscious screams at my brain to be alert
Oh into a deep stare my eyes upon what’s occurred
Empty Daze been gone by for what it was an who am I
when the stretch is far until the vineyard fruits are wine
There’s a new beginning an all that is mine
There’s a place for me when the East’s on fire
Lyric of Lynn’s timeline
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5 years of membership
- October 2020
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One year of membership
- August 2020
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05 WedReceived a critique
on Empty Daze from @Gracy
"Hi Lynn, I just saw your prose poem. I like it a lot, my only nit is that it needs prunning drastically, hope you don't mind my saying so. You have many needless words. The content and title are both fine. I see that yo…" -
01 Sat
- November 2019
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12 TueReceived a critique
on Grave Sites from @Sparrow 42
"This could do with an edit You start out as you, then drift to the second person. This needs to be sorted The theme is grand. Yours Ian .." - October 2019
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25 FriFirst publication
Grave Sites
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25 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
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I love writing Songs & Poetry I enjoy reading others also
Writing is like a hobby for me.
Location: CALIFORNIA, USA
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