LorienLord

Member since January 31, 2014

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Ghost

Posted Jul 27, 2020 · 17 lines · 5 critiques

Invisible to your eyes
transparent are the lies
that unseen lips whisper in the night,
as you lay fast asleep
fallen into dreams so deep, your lost soul cries
as it wanders through the empty rooms
searching for the love you lost,
but all you find are chambers dark
where ghostly lovers left their mark
white sheets lay crumpled on the floor
cobwebs hang across the door
and ravens cry out " Nevermore ",
as your heartbeat slows, then stops,
pale are the silent lips
that never will receive the kiss
to wake you from this loneliness
that has become your shroud.

LorienLord’s timeline

January 2024
31 Wed

Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2020
29 Wed

Received a critique
on Ghost from @Breakinglogic
"Lorien, I am lost as to the intention of the first few lines but from there I really really enjoyed your poem. The Raven allusion wasn't lost even on such an unread person as myself and I found it to successfully emphas…"
29 Wed

Received a critique
on Ghost from @jetz
"as are you, LL. chambers dark where ghostly lovers left their mark white sheets lay crumpled on the floor cobwebs hang across the door and ravens cry out " Nevermore ", Yummy."
27 Mon

Received a critique
on Ghost from @Lavender
"Hello, Lorien, When reading your poem, I felt as if I was traveling along with this ghost, visiting a home from the past once shared with a lover - both now gone and forever separated. Such a somber feeling. Thank you…"
27 Mon

Posted a poem
Ghost
"Invisible to your eyes"
Open thread 17 lines
03 Fri

Posted a poem
A Day At the Beach
"A flash of white makes me hard"
Open thread 6 lines
January 2019
31 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
January 2015
31 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2014
20 Fri

Posted a poem
Swan Dive
"The old bridge lantern swung to and fro, searching"
Open thread 15 lines
January 2014
31 Fri

First critique offered
on "Prologue " by @Seren
31 Fri

First publication
Home
31 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

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Swan Dive

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