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Lightinaz
Member since November 21, 2021
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All her love...
She found me...
out along the path.
I was barely clinging to life...
stuck between the cracks.
Her soft hands so gentle...
as she carried me here.
She set me in fresh soil...
now many years have passed.
She waters me still.
Occasionally she sings to me ...
turning my pot on the sill.
Often she turns the blinds...
that I may bask in the sun.
But would she ever believe?
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that I could one day bloom...
I wonder if she ever thinks...
that there's beauty inside of me?
yet she sings... and waters gently.
One day I will find the courage !
on that day she will see ...
that all her love created,
a flower inside of me.
Lightinaz’s timeline
- November 2022
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21 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2021
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26 FriCritiqued
"The Day After Thanksgiving..." by @Geezer
"I remember when my work sent me to the Spings of Colorado for a three week stint. On my balcony every night, while in my hotel room .. a pigeon would sit, we began to visit as I would toss him bread crumbs... He wasn't…" -
26 FriReceived a critique
on All her love... from @lovedly
"FOR one's liveliest woman Hope she endears many more years" -
26 FriReceived a critique
on All her love... from @Geezer
"you made the change I suggested. I am glad that you feel that you have a loving, tender care-giver, [it took me three times to find one that could domesticate me]. This last one has done it! 32 yrs. Anyway, glad that yo…" -
26 FriReceived a critique
on All her love... from @Geezer
"This sounds as simple as someone finding an interesting, young plant and deciding to take care of it to see what happens! Or it could be about someone who feels like they are entirely out of their league, who is being t…" -
26 Fri
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25 ThuReceived a critique
on Pando ( the tale of a Thanksgiving rooster) from @Geezer
"but I thought maybe you do things differently in your part of the country. At any rate, a somber story that puts us in the mood for some turkey instead of chicken/rooster! That dumb old rooster, getting in the way of th…" -
25 Thu
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24 WedReceived a critique
on Tranquility from @Ray Whitaker
"Who is “Mr Brigg”. I wish I knew, got sorta lost on it Really like the journey of this" -
24 WedReceived a critique
on Tranquility from @Geezer
"the comedic intent, it just didn't make it. I am sure that you will get back in form; seeing what I have from you. You have a good feel for descriptive verse and I can't wait to see what you do next! Sometimes, that's w…" -
24 WedReceived a critique
on Tranquility from @Obadiah Grey
"A well expressed, humorous exercise in slant rhyme, consonance, and assonance! Obi." -
24 WedReceived a critique
on Tranquility from @Geezer
"your story! Once again, I feel this work just trying to bust loose, because of the near rhyme. I don't think that many of the free verse people will hear it, but it is there! That said; your story takes us through the f…" -
24 Wed
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23 TueCritiqued
"AMAZED" by @Ray Whitaker
"I imagine the story is open to the readers interpretation, but as for me... I was at peace, stepping out of this life and into the next... and it was Ok... everything was going to be ok. Fantastic read !" -
23 TueFirst critique offered
on "AMAZED" (since unpublished) by @Ray Whitaker
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23 Tue
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21 SunFirst publication
Not the same...
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21 Sun
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21 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 MonHighest posting month
November 2021 — 5 poems
About Me
About me
Not the same as I used to be...
and for a guy like me, thats a good thing.
Location: Arizona, USA, USA
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