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Lee
Member since August 15, 2020
Member for 5 years, 9 months
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Fly Away With Me
Come and fly away with me, take a journey
lets see the stars, and touch the sky
lets just fly away
and never look back
come and fly away with me, don't you trust me?
just reach into my capsule
lets wonder the cosmos in my yellow rocket ship
have you ever been to mars?
its better than here
with him
come fly away with me mommy
Won't you come and blast through galaxies
travel lightyears
don't you love me?
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just trust me mommy
he cant hurt us
not in my yellow rocket ship
so come and fly away with me mommy
we'll be safe
in outer space
with my little yellow rocket ship
and you to keep me safe
fly away
and be happy
i love you mommy
won't you come
and fly away with me?
Lee’s timeline
- August 2025
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15 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2021
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15 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2021
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18 TueReceived a critique
on A Day In The Life from @lovedly
"just like everyone else just like everyone else shows paucity of words use metaphors similis likes etc AND HITLER should be a caps H etc and this is your 7th poem today not one have u critiqued do so please and may be c…" -
18 TueReceived a critique
on Fly Away With Me from @lovedly
"when I was 17 now at 82 i offer what I may know listen to Gee now read bitterly any of my poems thrash me then see how many I shall critique to help you just a kid" -
18 TueReceived a critique
on A Day In The Life from @Geezer
"really likes this one! You know the rest; C&P! ~ Geezer. ." -
18 Tue
- October 2020
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14 Wed
- August 2020
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23 Sun
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15 SatFirst critique offered
on "Breaking Wave" (since unpublished) by @Adrien Brook
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15 SatFirst publication
Coffee
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15 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 SatHighest posting month
August 2020 — 9 poems
About Me
About me
I'm a 17 yr old writer from Florida, i like writing and creating stories so this seems like a nice fit for me.
Location: Polk, USA
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