Lavaheart

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aurora glide

Posted Oct 28, 2018 · 31 lines · 8 critiques

Gently, she goes
as soft as a fawn
opens the window
and waits for the dawn
fireflies glow
wind caresses her face
as she sheds all the shadows
not leaving a trace
She dons velvet darkness
wrapped in its cloak
releases all poisons,
sylphlike,
in smoke
She is preparing for battle

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in her own, quiet way
She only wants wholeness
as she breaks through the gray
For soon she will weave
prismatic wonders of spells
her own inner aurora
lighting heaven from hell
For suffered she has
and it's time to forgive
unlock self-made prisons
and let herself live
and now as sunrise approaches
stars still in sight
she turns the skeleton key
and glides
into
flight

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30 Tue

Received a critique
on aurora glide from @raj
"I liked the lines "her own inner aurora lighting heaven from hell" which i believe is the foundation of your theme....nice.. ..................................................................................."
29 Mon

Received a critique
on aurora glide from @brittle light
"quite charming...but the meter seems a little too "cute" for the subject, even though it reads smooth as silk (which is no mean feat in itself) It has a jaunty bounce, imbuing the optimism of the piece, yet belies the s…"
29 Mon

Received a critique
on aurora glide from @gregwa8
"nice rhymes and rhythm to this poem. the nature imagery goes well with the magical imagery (especially the likening spells to the aurora) and I'm drawn into the emotional life of the protagonist. is this about someone w…"
28 Sun

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aurora glide
"Gently, she goes"
Open thread 31 lines
25 Thu

First critique offered
on "DONATE YOUR EYES (ADDRESSED TO MULTIPLE PEOPLE) in verses" by @lovedly
23 Tue

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"when we are in love"
Open thread 41 lines
21 Sun

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Recipe for Escape
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