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klundera
Member since March 10, 2022
Member for 4 years, 2 months
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Seed
Shivering on forbidding shores under
cries of wheeling gulls on slate grey sky
we wait for events to unfold,
feeling the blast of sea air coming in,
the salt taste sharp on our tongues,
it drains the blood from exposed skin,
yet your gentle breath wafts close
and warm on nape of neck as I extend
my arm to the far horizon and take
in palm of hand the slowly looming
over-laden boat and encompass it
like a precious incubating seed.
klundera’s timeline
- March 2023
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10 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2022
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18 FriReceived a critique
on Seed from @Ray Whitaker
"I am looking forward to reading more of your stuff. As far as the question about the ending... "over-laden boat" pu me in a pic of a boat about to swamped , crisis. It that what you intended?" -
16 WedCritiqued
"Eating Evil..." by @Geezer
"Hi, Korea/see ya and now/chow seemed like you were forcing a rhyme in, I felt, and 'the fiery depths of Hell!' is a nice, but rather well worn ,phrase. I always had it drummed into me that poetry doesn't HAVE to rhyme…" -
14 MonReceived a critique
on Seed from @Obadiah Grey
"Hiya, Klundera. Good piece! well written. The only thing that irked me was,,,,, 'slate grey sky' its a tad well worn a phrase. Cheers, Obi." -
12 Sat
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12 SatCritiqued
"Eating Evil..." by @Geezer
"Really like the pace and tone of this piece and particularly liked the opening stanzas. A couple of the rhymes sounded a bit forced to my ear, if I'm honest though.. and surely the French don't say Ciao, that's Italian……" -
12 SatFirst critique offered
on "Eating Evil..." by @Geezer
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11 FriReceived a critique
on Vladimir Goes to the Circus (Kill Me Now) from @Ray Whitaker
"Looking forward to reading more of your work." -
11 FriReceived a critique
on Vladimir Goes to the Circus (Kill Me Now) from @Candlewitch
"I like your title.it fits the piece of work. the pacing moves right along with no dragging spots. in reading the body, I get a case of the chills! I HATE clowns, they have always creeped me out severely! good poem! I ag…" -
11 FriReceived a critique
on Vladimir Goes to the Circus (Kill Me Now) from @Geezer
"your [poem], seems more like prose, but that is okay. I enjoyed it and I'm sure that most everyone else will too. Your language use is good, and the theme is one of current interest. The pace is fast, but not so fast th…" -
10 ThuFirst publication
Vladimir Goes to the Circus (Kill Me Now)
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10 ThuPosted a poem
Vladimir Goes to the Circus (Kill Me Now)
"Take a seat at the circus, the rest of the world is here." -
10 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am primarily a visual artist who finds some thing can only be expressed in words...
Location: UK
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Philip Larkin
Vicki Feaver
Kate Clanchy
Helen Dunmore
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