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Fake Feelings

Posted Nov 10, 2019 · 1 lines · 3 critiques

Have you ever thought of a tear falling to the ground, have you thought of a world without any warmth, touch, or feeling? I’m sure many people have but the truth is nobody converses with another human soul, in recent days, times, centuries people have never experienced feeling unless they are hurt because nobody is ever truly joyful they are too fake. The tears you feel when you cry is one of the only human things on this planet we call Earth. I have always wondered what lives beyond this planet… Maybe there are creatures that truthfully have feelings besides pain, do they even have feelings? We probably will never know due to man’s lack of mind, we are all too caught up in fake feelings that no one knows what the root of feelings true origin is just that we are human and Eve shined a spotlight on the truth of man when she took the fruit from the forbidden tree.

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Received a critique
on Fake Feelings from @Edna Sweetlove
"Not a poem. Not even verse. This is what we call "prose"."
13 Wed

Received a critique
on Fake Feelings from @c lynn brooks
"help immensely when reading a poem may I edit a bit see how you feel about this Have you ever thought about a tear falling to the ground(right here is a good start) or a world without using our natural senses( my little…"
11 Mon

Received a critique
on Fake Feelings from @Eumolpus
"And content aside, I don’t see it as a poem. Poetry is about images, metaphor, inner music, sound, charged words and all the rest. There are many forms of communication with words. Poetry needs boundaries. If we call ev…"
10 Sun

First publication
Fake Feelings
10 Sun

Posted a poem
Fake Feelings
"Have you ever thought of a tear falling to the ground, have you thought of a world without any warmth, touch, or feeling? I’m sure many people have but the truth is nobody converses with another human soul, in recent days, times, centuries people have never experienced feeling unless they are hurt because nobody is ever truly joyful they are too fake. The tears you feel when you cry is one of the only human things on this planet we call Earth. I have always wondered what lives beyond this planet… Maybe there are creatures that truthfully have feelings besides pain, do they even have feelings? We probably will never know due to man’s lack of mind, we are all too caught up in fake feelings that no one knows what the root of feelings true origin is just that we are human and Eve shined a spotlight on the truth of man when she took the fruit from the forbidden tree."
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