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Juarez5656
Member since December 8, 2024
Member for 1 year, 5 months
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October: Stillborn souls couple under sterile stars.
Here, a stagnant security claims a rentless rule,
shiftless peoples trek by in Rorschach gangs. Whistling
rumor of razor candies, radio codes from dim cars.
Blue car called Betty, finish baby blue, it seems only
in a time lost I was ever inside you. Me, cartographer of fake
treehouse promises, you, curator of spoiled moons;
but no ghosted face glossed in suspense rae, no single image
In virtual chutes where your imaginal iconostasis is irradiate.
Sedate car you called Betty, stilled eyes baby blue,
silent as these splinters I have of you.”“This is years ago.”
Our syllabics wedded once in sincerity’s Logos split
simply and forever, deep in the echoing hollow. Do I know
you?
I knew I knew you, I did. And this even this is only so true.
Juarez5656’s timeline
- December 2025
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08 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2025
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06 Thu
- January 2025
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18 Sat
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15 WedReceived a critique
on Fragment from @Ray Miller
"Poor me then. Summat I'll just have to live with." -
14 Tue
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14 TueCritiqued
"The Afterlife" by @Ray Miller
"this to be a negligible, ordinary, really banal, bad poem." -
14 TueCritiqued
"The Afterlife" by @Ray Miller
"this to be a negligible, ordinary, really banal, bad poem." -
14 TueCritiqued
"Alternative Medicine " by @Ray Miller
"A pretty monotonous poem which just as easily could have been prose In fact, it reads like the script of a Dateline episode broken up into stanzas." -
14 TueReceived a critique
on Fragment from @Ray Miller
"It's extremely difficult to follow, understand, enjoy.Do you imagine that other people will find it readable, relatable?" -
13 Mon
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04 Sat
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04 SatReceived a critique
on The Hungry Grass from @kowque
"This piece makes me want to go back to school. It's quite deep. I'm going to read it a few times more. The title and content made me think that stubborn grass that grows through cracks in concrete. Hehehe, write us an e…" - December 2024
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31 Tue
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30 MonCritiqued
"Friendship’s Quiet Flame" by @Ruby Lord
"liked the title, “Friendship’s Quiet Flame”, and your elaboration on it." -
29 SunCritiqued
"Today's Poem" by @kowque
"cracked”, that one is hilariously on point, kind of embarrassingly honest! And the Psalms. So full of majesty and p a i n. A well written paean to the romantique!" -
29 SunNew follower
@Clentin
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29 Sun
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23 MonPosted a poem
Prophecy of the Psychotic Peacock Feather
"Oh chthonic filigree, optical oracle, pinned firefly" -
21 SatReceived a critique
on Adventures In Scalped Neon from @Triskelion
"..now. I sort of feel the same way when I write classical style poetry...it seems inaccessible and strange nowadays. I just don't get anything you posted there...like someone buying a six million dollar banana and eatin…" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on Adventures In Scalped Neon from @Triskelion
"..is intriguing in that it could be interpreted as a challenge to confuse the ai algorithms, but I'd say its ineptitude got one over on you since it is ignorant to the utter nonsense you presented to it. It isn't progra…" -
16 MonReceived a critique
on Adventures In Scalped Neon from @Lavender
"I dug deeper into this style of poetry. It seems to fall nicely into Abstract Poetry - focusing on image and sounds, rather than sense of meaning. May not be fully understood by most, but certainly to be respected. If t…" -
16 MonReceived a critique
on Adventures In Scalped Neon from @Lavender
"Hello, Jaurez, I'll agree with the assessments of both the AI and Ray. I want to dig into this impressive language and intriguing imagery, but I'm finding myself lost, without direction as to the meaning. "...braille sy…" -
16 MonReceived a critique
on Adventures In Scalped Neon from @Ray Miller
"I admire the ambition and the vocabulary, but it feels like you're trying too hard with the imagery and not hard enough with producing a coherent theme. The result is, it's pretty dense." -
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15 SunHighest posting month
December 2024 — 5 poems
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09 MonNew follower
@mark
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09 Mon
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09 MonFirst critique offered
on "Negativendy" by @docmaverick
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08 SunFirst publication
Samhain (since unpublished)
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08 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
A fellow poet who loves neopoet.
From New York
Location: United States, USA
Favorite Poets
Susan Howe
Michael Palmer
Charles Baudelaire
Poetry is a freakish jazz. It is intended to be lived
not to be the plaything of a University.
I would rather get down and write with you guys without plastering my whole bibliography on here..given that is pretty big.
Recent Work
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Per aspera ad astra
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The Hungry Grass
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Samhain
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Adventures In Scalped Neon
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Elegy for Jess Tapper
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