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introvert
Member since March 18, 2011
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Should have known
I was around people
But I could not see any of them,
For my mind was somewhere else,
My heart was unsteady,
And my tears wanted to flow like the nile river.
He had talked to me as if he didnt care
He had not detected the pain in my voice,
That is the man I loved,
Sadly he was a married man
And to him I was a passing thing.
Sadly I did not view him like that
For I loved him more than life itself,
I loved him so much, death could not compete
Even the Lord was jealous
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However love was what I thought I had.
He did not understand and could not understand
For he loved his wife and two kids,
He cared for them more,
I was just a doll he could throw away,
Still I loved this rubbish.
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- March 2026
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18 WedAnniversary
15 years of membership
- March 2021
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18 ThuAnniversary
10 years of membership
- March 2016
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18 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2013
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03 TueReceived a critique
on Should have known from @loved
"Love not a married man ....so says the scripture ....you have wrought upon yourself this rapture ...who else can be caught in the trap ...none can say ....accept it that way ....and ....let the guy go away he ....has ch…" - August 2013
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23 FriReceived a critique
on Should have known from @Ian.T
"This one could be edited a little to make it flow better. A lot of feelings in there yet they are shrouded in the arrangement of the Stanzas, I will have a read again later. Old saying "If you love something let it go…" -
21 Wed
- October 2012
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22 MonReceived a critique
on MY Tears from @Rhiannon1010
"WOW. I love this. The raw emotion of this is breathtaking. Some of the best poetry is written in the heat of the moment, as this is an avenue through which one can imbue the essence of the poem with the life it needs to…" -
18 Thu
- March 2012
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18 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2011
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19 Mon
- April 2011
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11 MonFirst critique offered
on "I Love Your Face" by @hobo
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11 MonFirst publication
If I should love,so I will die
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11 Mon
- March 2011
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18 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 24 days later.
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