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IknowimgoodEnuf82
Member since January 14, 2023
Member for 3 years, 4 months
Wanting to Passionately Know
Who is this Girl ?
This Dark Madame of Rebellion ?
Has She ever Loved before, and if so will She Again?
Keep in Mind, I am her Friend,
A Simple Plan, To Be Her Man,
Maybe One Day Even Take Her Hand.
Can We Step To The Path of a Broken Heart,
And Bring Ourselves to Sow The Pieces That Were Torn All Apart
Just to show Her How Strong our Love Could Be,
If She could only See Herself through Me.
IknowimgoodEnuf82’s timeline
- January 2024
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14 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2023
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22 SunReceived a critique
on Wanting to Passionately Know from @Candlewitch
"thank you for your response. will you also be reading other poet/members poems and commenting on them? it would be great if you did. I'm sure everyone would enjoy and learn from it. *hugs, Cat" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on Wanting to Passionately Know from @Candlewitch
"on rereading your poem I found a mistake. in this line: "And Bring Ourselves to Sow The Pieces That Were Torn All Apart" do you mean "Sew" instead of (Sow)? *hugs, Cat" -
15 SunReceived a critique
on Wanting to Passionately Know from @Candlewitch
"I noticed you have a thing for capitalizing many words that should not be. what is your reasoning behind this habit? inquiringly, Cat" -
14 SatReceived a critique
on Wanting to Passionately Know from @RoseBlack
"This was a very good poem. I encourage you to continue to write and develop your skills. This is a wonderful place to explore and learn. We are not just writers here but a family who supports all the unique journeys we…" -
14 SatReceived a critique
on Wanting to Passionately Know from @Rula
"Welcome to Neopoet. i hope you'd enjoy your time and give us a chance to exchange the feedback that helps us all to grow with our poetry which is everyone's passion here. I just thought you didn't really need to capital…" -
14 SatReceived a critique
on Wanting to Passionately Know from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Welcome to neopoet. I think you’re a beautiful writer. Your poem is very good and I can’t really find much about it to critique. I read your last words. I encourage you to write. If you wanna touch people with your tale…" -
14 SatCritiqued
"In My Element (Erotica)" by @RoseBlack
"I wasn't sure if she was describing a man or a beautiful night's sky. The flow of words didn't appeal to me. Title didn't fit what I was thinking the poem was about." -
14 SatCritiqued
"They Called Her Satan by: (eddy styx)" by @Candlewitch
"I wasn't sure if I liked the title but I like the same types of topics to write about. I love the allure of him watching her from a distance in essence, because I'm a huge fan of human behavioral science. All around lik…" -
14 SatFirst critique offered
on "They Called Her Satan by: (eddy styx)" by @Candlewitch
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14 SatFirst publication
Wanting to Passionately Know
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14 Sat
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14 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Winner of such prestigious awards such as the Akarmans Young Authors Award, twice in grade school and placed in the higher rankings in other various contest's being awarded cash prizes too.
Location: ON Canada
Jim Morrison
An American Poet
Another Gone From Us Much Too Soon Before His Time Should Have Been
and to the 27 group He Did Become.
Edgar Allan Poe
Closed Minds Tell Me I'm Too Young To Understand What Words He Left Us as His Legacy
even mean. I say to those individuals
If you truly believe the words of which you have spoken to Me
Then
!!! You Must Read His Writing With Blind Eyes.
Nobody is too young to understand poetry in my opinion but that's just My opinion.
I believe poetry is up for Interpretation
like the Bible is
But that is Why it's truly beautiful
because it's possibilities for it's readers to relate to are endless. And the All Around Writer I'll speak about last is Myself
because I believe in the words I've written
I bring Myself Endless Inspiration and If Not Me
who else is going to ever believe in Me the most
??
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