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hperry524
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My Little One You'll Always Stay
Sometimes I wish I could see your face
and hold you in my arms once more
but when I see how much joy you bring how
could a mother ask for more.
Your bright brown eyes and your little smile
that warmed my heart before and now
are now in the arms of a loving family who
will never let you down.
I loved you with all my heart
and I will always till my dying day
cause you were once my little one
and my little one you'll always stay
I've cried so many tears
you don't know this but its true
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and they will never dry cause they show
me how much I love you
Cause I loved you with all my heart
and I will always till my dying day
cause you were once my little one
and my little one you'll always stay.
Heather M. Perry
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on My Little One You'll Always Stay from @wesley snow
"I hope you hang around. I agree with Roscoe that it is a sad, sweet poem. You didn't mark what intensity you want to be critiqued at, so I won't comment too much on the poem until I know. If you missed it, it's another…" -
16 MonReceived a critique
on My Little One You'll Always Stay from @Sparrow
"Firstly welcome to Neopoet. This first write holds such a lot of true feelings, I hope you will find many things that you can talk to us about as we journey on, Yours as always Ian.." -
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on My Little One You'll Always Stay from @Roscoe Lane
"A heartfelt welcome to Neopoet, This is a very sad but nicely written poem. Regards Roscoe..." -
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