hopeless_writer

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Newport random challenge #12 [I survived]

Posted Feb 7, 2022 · 21 lines · 3 critiques

Consider this a lamentation
A remembrance of a loss
that I grieve for -
One that’s silently felt

No amount of preparation; could
Make seeing the pictures easier,
The hollowness
The fear

Don’t give in - to the temptation
You have have done
the recovery

Find your motivation
I hear the birds again
That chirp had become

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So distant.
Sunlight is not rare

I am my own inspiration
I have climbed a mountain,
Conquered a jungle
And I survived.

This is my new celebration.

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February 2023
27 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2022
21 Mon

Received a critique
on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Candlewitch
"it is a very smooth poem, I like the way it flows. there is a bit of self-discovery throughout. it feels like you are concurring and resisting urges to reengage. great language usage! *hugs, Cat"
10 Thu

Received a critique
on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Ray Whitaker
"I like the jumble of emotion that I was left with. Reflective. Wistful. I would move your first Stanza to be placed as the third stanza. Keeping the third, just making it the fourth. I wouldn't give away the lamentation…"
07 Mon

Received a critique
on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Geezer
"take much cogitation to see that you have written about a lost relationship and probably have come across some pictures that were of happier times during it. You have gotten over it and but still feel a residual ache. T…"
07 Mon

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Newport random challenge #12 [I survived]
"Consider this a lamentation"
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Fuck covid 19 and august
"I had a life"
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April 2019
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try
"Angels fly"
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February 2019
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on "Future's not ours to see" by @raj
10 Sat

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11 critiques to date.
February 2018
27 Tue

First publication
Mistakes...
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First poem published 1 days later.

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Newport random challenge #12 [I survived]

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5 years of membership

on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Candlewitch

on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Ray Whitaker

on Newport random challenge #12 [I survived] from @Geezer

Newport random challenge #12 [I survived]

Fuck covid 19 and august

try

One year of membership

on "Future's not ours to see" by @raj

THE CLOCK

Mistakes...

Membership begins

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