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Hope21pilots
Member since March 20, 2017
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Lines
Don't you ever hear parents tell their children,"why don't you try coloring IN the lines"? I feel there are no lines in the world. No one has a perfect life, so they don't have the lines to know when to stop coloring. Artists show optimistics in this situation. Optimistics think that everything is great. They think that we're all in the lines. Thats because if we color in the lines the picture is perfect and we are our own picture. The optimistics are wrong. Our picture's lines aren't going together right, so we can't finish our picture. We won't ever know what it's like to be perfect. Even if we end up in heaven, we will never know what it's like to be perfect. The lines are not going to get finished.
Hope21pilots’s timeline
- March 2022
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20 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2018
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20 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2017
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29 WedReceived a critique
on Your nothing, are you from @Sparrow
"Read and enjoy the comments that have been given to you, I shall not talk of the poetic parts of this piece. Its content tells me that you are very capable of writing good poetry. So what next you may ask, well join one…" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on Your nothing, are you from @weirdelf
"this is not bad, there is nothing wrong with bleak. The one line that gets me, that makes me want to jump through the screen and throttle you, is- "Knowing this will happen to your children" How do you know? Will you do…" -
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29 WedReceived a critique
on Your nothing, are you from @jane210660
"Hi from the sunny UK - well ok, I'm lying about the sunny bit. The sky is discouragingly grey and the damp in the air is bone chilling. But........... Hi all the same. Looking at your name, Hope21pilots, you must have a…" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on Lines from @jane210660
"Hi and welcome to Neopoet. I really like what you are saying, although in its current format it is prose rather than poetry. I don't think it would be difficult to set this out in a more poetic form. If you wanted to, t…" -
28 TuePosted a poem
Lines
"Don't you ever hear parents tell their children,"why don't you try coloring IN the lines"? I feel there are no lines in the world. No one has a perfect life, so they don't have the lines to know when to stop coloring. Artists show optimistics in this situation. Optimistics think that everything is great. They think that we're all in the lines. Thats because if we color in the lines the picture is perfect and we are our own picture. The optimistics are wrong. Our picture's lines aren't going together right, so we can't finish our picture. We won't ever know what it's like to be perfect. Even if we end up in heaven, we will never know what it's like to be perfect. The lines are not going to get finished." -
25 SatFirst publication
Your nothing, are you
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20 MonJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 4 days later.
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Hey I probably won't post anything on this account but I enjoy all your work people
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