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Heather Perry
Member since January 7, 2023
Member for 3 years, 4 months
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I'm Famous
You make me famous
you might not know it but it's true.
You always talk about the shit
that I've put us through.
When you speak about m even
in horrible ways, it gives me the power
to stick with you till you finally
fade away.
You've turned so dark and cold
so far I made you this way from all
the stories you've told.
I'm so famous deep in your eyes.
You say you'll stop thinking about me
which you won't even try.
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So tell me I'm famous for you know it's true.
Tell me I'm famous I want to hear the
words come from you.
I'll be forever famous when I'm old and gray.
I'll be ever famous till your hatred is gone
away.
Heather Perry’s timeline
- January 2024
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07 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2023
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19 SunReceived a critique
on My Demons from @swamp-witch
"A belated welcome to Neopoet to you! Your poem title caught my attention. I definitely can relate to the feeling of battling demons. Sometimes you feel like you're able to walk away, but really they're just letting you…" - February 2023
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16 ThuReceived a critique
on New Satanist from @Seren
"I promise not to mess with you. Just jokes. This is darkly good well done!! The last two lines are the pin. It smacks the reader in the face. Kind regards Seren/Jayne" -
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12 SunReceived a critique
on Wishes, Hopes, And Dreams from @Rosewood Apothecary
"One suggestion I have is the addition of a single comma. Wishes are for everyone so are hopes and dreams. My hopes were took long ago at least I still have dreams. Dreams, unlike wishes which you have to look upon a sta…" -
11 SatReceived a critique
on Nothing But Alien from @Geezer
"about the title. Your language use is fine, the rhythm is alright until you reach the sixth stanza, where it starts to unravel and become a rant! That's okay, I think it becomes a bit more of a warning that you are abou…" -
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10 FriReceived a critique
on Evil Night from @Rosewood Apothecary
"That first stanza is a bit awkward. Evil is in the air I can feel it in my bones. I pray to God but he doesn't hear me so I feel very much alone. I think the rest is very smooth and this will make that first stanza rhyt…" -
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on Dead Like You from @M4GG0TM3NT4L
"wooooooooah boy,, this struck a chord w/ me. amazing!! the language use, basically everything imo. i can see this being a song or something" -
09 ThuReceived a critique
on Dead Like You from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Again for my tastes, I’d move some things around specifically that first stanza. The remainder of the poem is organized very well. I definitely always love the words that you write. I love the self reflection evident as…" -
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08 WedReceived a critique
on Lonely Road from @Abby
"I really liked this thematically. The only thing I would suggest is that the line, “I look towards the heavens,” doesn’t feel entirely necessary. Looking towards the sky implies it, so it may be a little redundant. But…" -
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- January 2023
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23 MonNew follower
@Ekaterina Alexandrovna Sherbatskaya
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15 SunHighest posting month
January 2023 — 19 poems
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07 SatFirst publication
Feeling Like Johnny Cash
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07 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
im a young poet trying to make a name for myself
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I'm Famous
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New Satanist
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Mustangs
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Messed Up
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Nothing But Alien
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Wishes, Hopes, And Dreams
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Evil Night
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Dead Like You
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So Much My Heart Can Take
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Lonely Road
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