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heartfelt4262
Member since January 7, 2020
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Is this all a Game
What if this is all fake,
all a game being played,
every decision made,
using a game plan,
every twinkle in your eye a facade,
every kiss the same as every other,
every unread message,
the result of lost interest,
I ask is this all real,
will the feelings prevail,
what if this is all the same,
all a game still being played,
soon you will realise games can only be played for so long
heartfelt4262’s timeline
- January 2025
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07 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2021
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07 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2020
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on Is this all a Game from @Geezer
"your message and it says to me; you wonder if the love professed, the feelings are real? Eumolpus is right, share your work and really look at the critique. Think about what you're saying. Read as many poets as you have…" -
08 WedReceived a critique
on Is this all a Game from @Eumolpus
"I would suggest a few thinks in the last part I ask "is this all real, will the feelings prevail, what if this is all the same, all a game still being played?" Soon you will come to realize games can only be played for…" -
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I'm a young start out poet who is looking for a place to safely share my poetry and get possitive feedback
Location: FL, USA
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