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Hannah Moonlark
Member since December 20, 2019
Member for 6 years, 5 months
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What I love about Her
What I love about Her
I love
How random she is
How she’s unique
I love how she wears eyeliner on her face and
Nothing else
I love her ease with kids
I love how her voice sounds
And what she says
I love how she films her whole face and isn’t scared to post it
I really like her
I want to love her
Hannah Moonlark’s timeline
- December 2024
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20 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2021
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21 Sun
- December 2020
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20 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2020
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23 WedCritiqued
"Lost and Found" by @Viviana Smith
"Nice poem. I like that it's from the perspective of a ball." - June 2020
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23 TueCritiqued
"Good to Bad`" by @Heather Sangster
"Welcome to Noepoet. Nice poem. I like the happy ending, Maybe on the line "Go backwards up the slide, slowly now its not easy" you should put a comma like this: "slowly now, it's not easy" But I don't know." -
19 FriReceived a critique
on Pining for You from @Gracy
"Hello Hannah and welcome to Neopoet. At least, I haven't seen any poetry of yours here. I agree with most of the other comments. I also make mistakes, because I grew up in Argentine Patagonia, so my parents spoke Englis…" -
19 FriReceived a critique
on Pining for You from @c lynn brooks
"What if you were to extend your last line a bit to wondering when I will see you again and it should be sitting on the balcony not in very sad poem except for lately I have always had cats around me my daughter has five…" -
18 ThuReceived a critique
on Pining for You from @Geezer
"about the cat. I know that it wasn't your cat, but you do seem to have gotten the message of loss. I thought maybe that you might give some thought to changing the title to " Looking for you." Very touching piece of wor…" -
18 ThuReceived a critique
on Pining for You from @Rula
"I like your poem (though sad in its theme) as it's raw with feelings but I wasn't sure about the title. I think you needed a more inviting one to attract your readers. Titles make a big difference. Neopoet is conducting…" -
10 WedCritiqued
"Leave Me Be (June contest)" by @Sparrow 42
"I think maybe you should add a colon to the line in the third stanza like "Now know this: you are the same as I" idk" - May 2020
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02 SatCritiqued
" I sit alone " by @katia B
"I love this poem and think you have a lot of potential. Also, it seemed like you were pretty sad, so I hope you are better now. It really does get better, believe it or not" - April 2020
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06 MonReceived a critique
on She then vs. now from @Geezer
"I just thought she was." That is a beautiful line. Is it was, or is? Even though people aren't perfect to the rest of the world, they might still be for us. Hope that is still true for you. ~ Geezer. ." - February 2020
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20 ThuCritiqued
"Soothing Projections" by @themoonman
"I like this poem a lot. I was just thinking that maybe you could say, "The sound of the clock beeping," instead of, "The beep beep of the clock." But I'm not sure. Maybe that's what you meant to do." -
19 Wed
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06 ThuReceived a critique
on What she said from @Geezer
"much change it, but modify it to explain what you are writing about. And why does she have to like someone else? Maybe she is not ready for [any] relationship? ~ Geezer. ." -
05 WedReceived a critique
on What she said from @themoonman
"I like sweet and to the point ... but... .//Ahh feelings suck why are they so perfect// what is so perfect, I didn't find the subject until your afterward ... maybe a bit more info or even (why is she, he so perfect) ee…" -
05 WedReceived a critique
on The Worst Part from @Edna Sweetlove
"...so my comments are limited. 1. In Line 6, you should say "better than I", not "better than me"; 2. I feel the final line is superfluous and also open to total misinterpretation by anyone outside North America. In non…" -
03 MonNew follower
@Edna Sweetlove
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- January 2020
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- December 2019
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20 FriFirst publication
Her (since unpublished)
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20 FriFirst critique offered
on "Rain and You (Sonnet No. 1)" (since unpublished) by @Alan S Jeeves
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20 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
She/Her
I am a young poet who wants to publish my poems and read other people's.
I like to read, write, knit, and relax.
Have a good day!
I read all my messages but I seem to always do it too late. I'm sorry.... :/
Location: Canada
Recent Work
What I love about Her
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The Worst Part
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Dazzle
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So Real
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Fit for angels
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