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funmzy Artz
Member since November 9, 2020
Member for 5 years, 6 months
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Shall I compare thee to the Selene.
In thy self is nature's gift
thou art the definition
of peace
I the troubled one
stealthily takes shelter
in thy tranquility
just a glance of thee i need
to make my worries vanish
thou art such a sight
to behold
your bright face
makes the vindictive
abyss in my heart fade
I could stare at thee
for eternity
if I don't get stricken by
the pang of reality.
funmzy Artz’s timeline
- November 2025
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09 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2022
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27 SunReceived a critique
on Shall I compare thee to the Selene. from @Ray Whitaker
"I usually don't write in this manner, however find myself using older contexts occasionally. you've done a fine job here. I would only make one suggestion.... the next the last line, replace the work strikes with "stric…" -
27 SunReceived a critique
on Shall I compare thee to the Selene. from @Candlewitch
"a lovely poem you have crafted here. these are my favorite lines: your bright face makes the vindictive abyss in my heart fade I could stare at thee for eternity I could and shall apply this to me darlin' husband, Steve…" -
27 SunReceived a critique
on Shall I compare thee to the Selene. from @Geezer
"I stay away from the archaic language and am not particularly enamored of it. However, I can appreciate this attempt at going with the language of the old masters. It shows that you have some versatility. 1] thou [art]…" -
27 Sun
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26 SatReceived a critique
on The Burning Phoenix. from @Geezer
"a dilemma here. I want to correct some of your speech but find that I would be extinguishing some of the charm of the work and fixing something that doesn't need fixing. I think that if I were to ask another Nigerian, t…" -
26 SatReceived a critique
on The Burning Phoenix. from @Candlewitch
"I like your title and flow into the poem proper. there is much emotion put into this, which I really enjoyed. these are my favorite lines: I walk the steps of dreams To fufill my predestined fate Agony and guilt weigh m…" -
26 SatCritiqued
"Rage Rider by: eddy styx" by @Candlewitch
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26 SatCritiqued
"Rage Rider by: eddy styx" by @Candlewitch
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26 SatCritiqued
"Rage Rider by: eddy styx" by @Candlewitch
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26 SatCritiqued
"Rage Rider by: eddy styx" by @Candlewitch
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26 SatCritiqued
"Great Longing" by @lovedly
"I love the tone of this poem. Also referring me to a moment in the past." -
26 SatCritiqued
"I WE THEE" by @lovedly
"The poem is a great one. Emotional and truly relatable. Love the use of "ye"." -
26 SatFirst critique offered
on "I WE THEE" by @lovedly
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26 Sat
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25 FriReceived a critique
on On the endless road from @Candlewitch
"in S2 L1 beautiful (and) fascinating road S5 L1 (on) a beautiful morning this is a lovely poem to start the day with. makes me feel like getting out of the house and having an adventure! *hugs, Cat" - November 2021
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09 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2020
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27 Fri
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12 ThuReceived a critique
on On the endless road from @Geezer
"to Neopoet. I hope that you find our site a welcome place and that you will use the critique and comments to help you become the poet that you want to be. I had some trouble with a couple of the words that you have used…" -
12 Thu
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09 MonFirst publication
On the endless road
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09 Mon
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09 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am a lover of nature.Writing is the only way to express myself and change the world
Location: Nigeria, NGA
Favorite Poets
Alfred Tennyson
Woke Soyinka
Niyi Osundare
Juanita Bell
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