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faderinsoro
Member since November 8, 2017
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Intense Feelings
Just in a glimpse,
Everything becomes void
Where are they?
Those who promised to be there always
Can't believe they are all gone
Within a glance.
Were their feelings true?
Right from the onset?
I thought of holding on,
But deep within myself,
Its gonna have adverse effects
Which might bring more pains
I thought of letting go,
Owing up to maturity
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Yet,I couldn't
Cus I was scared of loosing something,
Something, I might never regain
Thinking about the old times,
The bonds we shared,
Was it from there,
I made a mistake of trusting you?
Or did you really mean to stay
From then till eternity?
But along the way,
You developed a cold feet?
Communication amends relationship
While knowing this,
You still don't want reconciliation?
Damn so bent on staying away right?
Just whenever you feel its totally wrong,
Owing to your mistakes,
Not minding how I've lived without you,
Will gladly accept you again!
Wholeheartedly!
Provided your vacuum is not yet filled!
*Faderinsoro*
faderinsoro’s timeline
- November 2022
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08 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2018
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30 FriReceived a critique
on Intense Feelings from @IRiz
"Dear faderinsoro, your poem is a reflection showing true feelings and deep bitterness I relate very much to your calm contemplation these simple laconic lines are inspiring: Thinking about the old times, The bonds we sh…" -
30 FriReceived a critique
on Intense Feelings from @Geezer
"that you are trying hard to express yourself in a second language, that is very hard to learn! I really got the message. My advice is to get a really good dictionary to look up the words that you are not quite familiar…" -
30 Fri
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08 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2017
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04 MonReceived a critique
on MY EMOTIONS from @swamp-witch
"A good submission to the contest! I'm sorry I missed reading it before the contest was complete. School keeps me terribly occupied this time of year. I truly love the line "When will the emotions not outburst you?" Such…" - November 2017
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08 WedFirst publication
MY EMOTIONS
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08 Wed
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08 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
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A young lady whose major purpose is to give hope to the hopeless, And to change the world
Location: NIGERIA
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