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Ethereal Requiem
Member since June 2, 2022
Member for 4 years
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Unexpected Allies
Many have told me that our time is over
I may be unlucky but you were my clover
Kiss you cuz you’re Irish I did
But look at how my heart has fallen and slid
A new source of strength has been found
A community that won’t let me touch the ground
Their poetic embrace is tonic to the soul
To return to me what love has stole
Their words of wisdom resonate intensely
For them I am grateful immensely
Kindred spirits that can see through my eyes
Their understanding was a relief and a surprise
Never did I thought my work would be appreciated
For people like them I have patiently waited
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To listen to the story my heart wishes to share
With their critique I feel like they actually care
I have found my clan which I belong
With their support I realized I have to be strong
To restore my faith to what it once was
I shall rise back to prominence
~AM~
Ethereal Requiem’s timeline
- June 2023
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02 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2022
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06 MonReceived a critique
on Unexpected Allies from @Candlewitch
"some poetic pieces can be enhanced with punctuation, some stand on their own. if you want help with punctuating, I can help you with that? in this line: Never did I (thought) my work would be appreciated (swap think for…" -
06 Mon
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05 Sun
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05 SunReceived a critique
on Ethereal Requiem from @Candlewitch
"my husband Steven's sister, Wendy, was talking trash about me at our wedding (we had an outdoor service at our home) Wendy went to each little group of people and stirred them up with bad "tales" which she knew nothing…" -
05 SunReceived a critique
on Changing Tides from @Jackweb
"Stay strong, be well soon! I know is not that easy to endure and forget. Love is strong as death! I believe, as you keep writing poetry your happiness is assured. As you know nothing you can do anymore about her. Establ…" -
04 SatReceived a critique
on Changing Tides from @Jackweb
"A poignant reminder of a passing of time. She was truly irreplaceable in your heart. I observed no one deem fit to replace her in your thought. I felt your disheartening moment. This poem evokes a keen sense of sadness…" -
04 Sat
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04 SatReceived a critique
on Ethereal Requiem from @Jackweb
"You have a wonderful piece of work. You really scribbled emotive words. Thought gripping lines ! She must be a very wonderful lady by your side. This poetry is a tangible proof of a testament. Beautifully crafted!" -
04 SatReceived a critique
on Ethereal Requiem from @Candlewitch
"i could help you with your poem :) I look forward to reading more of your poetry! (I had a feeling that Snow was person of the female persuasion, lol) *hugs, Cat" -
03 FriReceived a critique
on Ethereal Requiem from @Candlewitch
"first off...I like your poem very much! but I feel that your longer lines should be shortened. here is an example: The sea which is your home, a place that you find release For you swim through my mind, your smile prese…" -
02 ThuCritiqued
"WITH YOU" by @turbo1904
"I love the depth of emotion you displayed in this poem, and the repetition was really powerful. As someone who recently endured heartbreak I related to your message on an emotional level. Very well written" -
02 ThuFirst critique offered
on "WITH YOU" by @turbo1904
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02 ThuFirst publication
Ethereal Requiem
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02 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Hello everyone!! I'm currently an aspiring pharmacist who enjoys writing poetry in his free time. I tend to write based off of my emotions, especially romance and sad poetry. I enjoy writing free verse because it offers more flexibility but I'm willing to learn other styles and to refine the use of meter
Location: NY, USA
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