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Erin Burchell
Member since March 15, 2023
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Heaven bound
Is it peaceful up there?
Is it everything you hoped for?
Did you find the peace that you craved?
Surrounded by family that had already passed.
perhaps your wife was waiting for you at the gates,
Ready to be by your side again.
She was always certain that you would become an angel
A light to find in the dark.
Just like you were when you walked the earth.
Erin Burchell’s timeline
- March 2024
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15 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2023
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06 ThuReceived a critique
on Heaven bound from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Sorry to hear of your grandfather’s passing. I agree with you that writing is a great place to ask questions without answers and also to memorialize your grandfather. I think that the biggest thing it helps with is proc…" -
05 WedReceived a critique
on Heaven bound from @Geezer
"that your great grandparents meant a lot to you, I can tell from the gentle questions you ask. This is my take on what the AI has said and some things that you can do to make this smoother. Hello Grandpa, are you feelin…" -
05 Wed
- March 2023
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16 ThuReceived a critique
on The war inside from @Lavender
"Hello, Erin, Your feelings are very clear and your poem is well written. I'm glad you have this gift of poetry to release these thoughts and hopefully somewhat soothe your soul. I look forward to reading more. Welcome!…" -
15 WedReceived a critique
on The war inside from @Rosewood Apothecary
"We all strive for human connection, familial and otherwise. I’m sorry to hear about your struggle to maintain a relationship with your father. I think you’re an excellent writer and I would be honored if you shared more…" -
15 WedFirst publication
The war inside
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15 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I've been into creative writing for years but have just recently started with poetry. Most of my poetry will be/is about the world I see around me or my past.
Location: West midlands
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