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Eniola
Member since December 22, 2017
Member for 8 years, 5 months
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Grey smoke
In the lonely hours.
When Dark Shadows surrounds me.
And Burning goosebumps emerge.
I see that image again.
On the broken mirror, beside my lamppost.
Her hair dripping wet.
Watching my portrait all day,
Like Crystalline reflections.
I skipped a breathe, and watched.
Being swiftly chased,
Down the dark alley into a pit of echoing voices.
I screamed, but there was no one there.
So I asked you?
Can I lay by your side.
Eniola’s timeline
- December 2022
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22 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2018
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22 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2018
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10 SatReceived a critique
on Grey smoke from @trekker
"I like my fellow country man. I would like to suggest one change and that would be to change "on the mirror" in the fifth line to "in the mirror". I think it would be much more effective. Good poem though. trekker" - January 2018
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26 FriReceived a critique
on Grey smoke from @Geezer
"that this poem may be the result of a nightmare. Is there a reason for the words "Dark Shadows", Burning and Chrystalline to be capitalized? No e on the end of breath, the only time you might put an e on it is when you…" -
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19 FriReceived a critique
on Felony from @BettyBuff
"Gosh that's a scouring bitterness seeping through the word choices! Good use of opposites...Heaven/ hell...pain/pleasure. However, please for the love of god use the word 'your' instead of text-lexis 'ur'...it's just la…" -
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- December 2017
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23 SatReceived a critique
on Ethereal from @swamp-witch
"I see you've already gotten some good feedback! I also enjoyed the poem and appreciated the images. I hope you will consider Obadiah and Eumolpus' suggestions. I think they will make the poem all the better, but if you…" -
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22 FriFirst critique offered
on "Papi Mario" (since unpublished) by @chevyvent
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22 FriFirst publication
Ethereal
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22 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Trust me, I'm weird
Location: Abuja,Nigeria
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Manuel d poet
Rudy
Pariolodo
Dr Seuss
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