emptiness

Member since February 1, 2015

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Posted Feb 20, 2015 · 11 lines · 1 critiques

no lips can utter
no words by sound
convey beauty
when it exists unbound
on this planet
nor no other
not even a kiss
can impart enough
to a beauty such as this
when you're in love

Steven Zoric

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Received a critique
on Untitled from @Sparrow
"You now have streamed three poems without a title, come on commit to your write and give the write a banner to fly. Your words are fine and the themes are good so come on give them a name.. There are a few workshops tha…"
20 Fri

Posted a poem
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"no lips can utter"
Open thread 11 lines
04 Wed

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on untitled from @Rula
"a warm welcome to the Neopoet! It is good to read you and have you among us. A nice little piece. I wanted to know more, we are all curious to hear the whole story but it is your choice and I respect it. I don't think I…"
03 Tue

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on untitled from @weirdelf
"you can write a title. This is bordering on pretentiousness, though your poetry is fine."
03 Tue

Posted a poem
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"I can't go with you"
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"which gate doth now"
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