Emina Smajevic

Member since October 10, 2013

Member for 12 years, 7 months

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hey joy

Posted Feb 25, 2019 · 22 lines · 5 critiques

The world about humans
not the circumstances,
world about hearts
not the crony souls,
world about loyal distance
not the hypocrisy.

World about peace
not the waiting.

World about chances and not
what we used to be.

World about open sun
not the memories.

World about these mountain cliffs
that can shelter so many lives.

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world about broken shadows of my face
that shelter deep ocean.

World about hope
not the decisions.

And only sometimes it lasts forever.

Just only sometimes
it lasts
forever.

Emina Smajevic’s timeline

October 2023
10 Tue

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2019
28 Thu

Received a critique
on hey joy from @Geezer
"to rewrite the whole poem for you, but I think if I can get you to see the pattern and rhythm in it, you can figure it out for yourself. I would do this: The world about humans not the circumstance About the human heart…"
26 Tue

Received a critique
on hey joy from @Geezer
"be an echo, but I really agree with Eumolpus, you should rework this poem, [which is a great theme, by the way]. I do get it though. I read it differently. I get the idea clearly. Maybe the line that he mentions, should…"
25 Mon

Received a critique
on hey joy from @Eumolpus
"and the flow is nice, and the conclusion works. The poem has a good presence. In my view these lines are much too long and break up the rhythm of the reading which has a certain pace... The world about these mountain cl…"
25 Mon

Posted a poem
hey joy
"The world about humans"
Open thread 22 lines
October 2018
10 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2014
10 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
August 2014
01 Fri

Posted a poem
The nothing
"Once"
Open thread 5 lines
July 2014
17 Thu

Posted a poem
A drawing in black ink
"In morning I was shown"
Open thread 11 lines
December 2013
28 Sat

Most-discussed work
Sadness

18 critiques to date.
November 2013
18 Mon

First critique offered
on "A Selection Of Haiku's " by @mand
October 2013
10 Thu

First publication
don't bother me
10 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

Location: Sarajevo Bosnia&Herzegovina

Recent Work

love twin

Posted: 28 November, 2013

Mosquitoes in the night !

Posted: 22 November, 2013

The mirrors' ball

Posted: 17 November, 2013

don't bother me

Posted: 10 October, 2013

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Workshops

		Skill level:
Renga 9 "Hatred's Legacy"	(syllabus)	Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2014-08-04	Concluded
THE RIGHT WORD .....Let's get started	(syllabus)	Wading Pool	Started 2013-11-25	Concluded

10 years of membership

on hey joy from @Geezer

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on hey joy from @Eumolpus

5 years of membership

One year of membership

on "A Selection Of Haiku's " by @mand

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