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ember
Member since January 28, 2021
Member for 5 years, 4 months
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vanity's sanity
my vanity stares at me,
i stare back,
through the glass, it is confined in.
i mouth to my vanity,
'you lack the freedom that i, myself, have to roam this reality,'
mouthing back to me.
my vanity is lovelier,
my vanity is more kept.
confined it understands,
the sanity in my vanity,
i vow to protect.
ember’s timeline
- January 2026
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28 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2022
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21 FriReceived a critique
on vanity's sanity from @Mr joghe
"Hello! You are communicating with vanity means you're sane. It happened in some cases when poet is trying to figure out mysteries. Does your vanities make you sane? Don't the cloudy thought to suppress you. Check the 'i…" -
20 Thu
- March 2022
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31 ThuReceived a critique
on tradition from @Ray Whitaker
"I like the inference of striking out on your own, and not carryong along the family prejudices. Not sure that I would use the repetitive beginnings of lines tho. Your piece would be more effective had you chosen differe…" -
31 ThuReceived a critique
on tradition from @Ray Whitaker
"I like the inference of striking out on your own, and not carryong along the family prejudices. Not sure that I would use the repetitive beginnings of lines tho. Your piece would be more effective had you chosen differe…" -
31 Thu
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31 ThuReceived a critique
on tradition from @Candlewitch
"we seem to have had different family problems, in fact opposite. I couldn't wait to get away from my family on the maternal side. they were congenital, sociopathic liars. and religious fanatics. Geezer has found the one…" -
31 Thu
- January 2022
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28 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
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16 SunCritiqued
""Sun-catchers"" by @Michael Anthony
"this poem is one of my favorites that ive read on here so far.. the pictures it painted inside my head were so pleasant, i have so many favorite lines on here just beautiful.awesome job" -
15 SatReceived a critique
on power off from @Race_9togo
"It reads much better, and you have not changed the meaning. Good work." -
15 SatReceived a critique
on power off from @Triskelion
"Potential deserves encouragement. Just keep writing. Thomas" -
13 Thu
- December 2021
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06 Mon
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03 Fri
- April 2021
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27 Tue
- March 2021
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12 Fri
- February 2021
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08 Mon
- January 2021
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31 SunCritiqued
"Sea of Beauty (Jan Contest)" by @lovedly
"thank you for your response, it made me smile :-)" -
30 SatCritiqued
"Sea of Beauty (Jan Contest)" by @lovedly
"this poem is for sure gonna be in my head for the rest of the day" -
28 ThuCritiqued
"The Boy and the Candy Bar" by @Lavender
"this poem is so lighthearted and it made me smile reading it out loud honestly sounds like i was freestyle rapping haha awesome job" -
28 ThuFirst critique offered
on "The Boy and the Candy Bar" by @Lavender
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28 ThuFirst publication
my vanity is my sanity (since unpublished)
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28 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
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Location: United States
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vanity's sanity
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power off
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you
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your lantern
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shattered fragments
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rolls of thunder
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I saw the sun
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