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EmanuelSfatcu
Member since April 28, 2024
Member for 2 years, 1 month
Chains
I always loved to be free,
Not to be chained by my thoughts and words.
But with this, some problems arise,
I'm inconsistent with my does and likes.
I can't build something 'cause I feel the need to change,
Boredom takes control of me.
I try to grasp my feelings,
But my passion slowly dies.
And I am left there with only failures in my arms,
Wondering,
Is this who I am?
A fire that shines bright for a month,
And after that, I need another compound?
Or I just lack discipline in my life?
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I tried to fix things,
To stick with them even after the flame is long gone.
But I am just there,
Wishing I was gone.
And if I start to run,
I have to abandon what I built,
And again let things incomplete.I just need one hint,
To stop my answer squint,
And start my sprint,
To my inner olymp
For eternity to burn.
'Cause I fear being the one,
That lets things undone,
And at the end of life,
To be left left with projects I didn't arise.
EmanuelSfatcu’s timeline
- April 2025
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28 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2024
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31 Fri
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31 Fri
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04 Sat
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03 FriNew follower
@zuella
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- April 2024
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29 Mon
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29 MonReceived a critique
on Inside from @MermaidMaster
"This poem is so real and incredibly well written. Your voice really shines through! You communicate so openly and honestly it's wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing! I look forward to reading more of your work :) -MM" -
29 MonReceived a critique
on Inside from @Alex Tanner
"I enjoyed this work, it made me think of Bob Dylan and the final lines from "Ballad in Plain D". Ah, my friends from the prison, they ask unto me "How good, how good does it feel to be free "? And I answer them most mys…" -
29 Mon
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29 MonFirst critique offered
on "Best Anniversary" by @Clentin
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28 Sun
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28 Sun
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28 Sun
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28 SunFirst publication
Inside
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28 Sun
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28 Sun
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28 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I am a bit of what I used to be, what I do, and what I wish to become. I'm not a writer, I'm not a social worker, I'm not engaged, I'm not a gamer, although all of these and many more make up who I am. But you can call me Emi
Location: Romania, Iași
Recent Work
Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
|---|---|---|
| Shine | 05/24 New Member Contest | – |