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ElusiveKnight
Member since April 27, 2021
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Pearls at Your Feet
I watch pink-blue horizons
as visions of your face
fade in the sinking sun
burn me in flames of your grace.
Reflections of satin white seas
open and shut walls
the Elysium of endless dreams
where shadow and light fall.
Nameless on these pages
weaving sweet tapestry
in sonnets, poetic sequences
as every word comes rapidly.
Secrets of your heart
touched by subtle motions
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rise with a rising star
at the start of profuse notions.
Gems of topaz
on your caramel hands
sun rain angels dance
in a lover's trance.
Let me play a sonata
as silver moons glide
the muse, Hakuna Matata
you by my side.
Every inch of you is beautiful
curves, your body petite
yesterdays were forever few
I lay pearls at your feet.
I disappear into an ocean of people
leaving paths of sweet jade
until we meet again in the regal
among diamond blue shades.
ElusiveKnight’s timeline
- April 2026
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27 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2023
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31 FriReceived a critique
on Pearls at Your Feet from @Rosewood Apothecary
"And I love the way you worked it into the poem Every inch of you is beautiful curves, your body petite yesterdays were forever few I lay pearls at your feet. Love that stanza Tim" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on Pearls at Your Feet from @swamp-witch
"I enjoyed your poem. The imagery and word choices are romantic and whimsical. However, I see that you have submitted that to the "love poems" contest. You have to be mindful of the "open to new participants" or "conclud…" -
29 WedReceived a critique
on Pearls at Your Feet from @Geezer
"use of color in this piece, makes it a kalideoscope of emotion and a portrait of romanticism. I think the use of 'burning' is what you are seeing; the sun dipping below the horizon, is producing a flare of red? I think…" -
29 Wed
- April 2022
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27 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2021
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27 TueReceived a critique
on Nights of Seduction from @Candlewitch
"very good erotica. so well written. but it should be marked with an *explicit tag. excellent imagery. always, Cat -" -
27 TueFirst publication
Nights of Seduction (since unpublished)
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27 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: United States
Favorite Poets
Edgar Allen Poe
Langston Hughes
Tupac Shakur
William Shakespeare
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