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elizabeth foreman
Member since September 21, 2022
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Dysfunctional dad gone by the age of 5,
No arguments ,
Just silence.
Mourning your absence , craving attention
Just from the age of 5.
I beg for you back but she just says no.
The reminder of you stays in this home
She found someone new,
Smiling again.
Yet something ain't right ,
I am not her friend…
I am lazy , scruffy and a disappointment in itself,
Haven't heard these words since before you left.
I remind her of you .
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In my eyes , in my heart.
I am back at the start.
It's taking its toll,
I can't take it no more,
The judgement, the darkness and the sorrow.
I remind her of you being here.
I will continue to remind her of you now I am gone.
elizabeth foreman’s timeline
- September 2023
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21 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2022
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25 SunReceived a critique
on reminder from @Administrative Council
"It is important to understand that poetry is a creative endeavor. Dad leaves mom, I'm sad. That scenario must be written in a unique creative craft because and no offence but I have read hundreds like this, it needs to…" -
22 Thu
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21 WedFirst publication
reminder
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21 Wed
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21 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
i don't really know how to write poems but it is a way to get out what in need to get out
Location: England united kingdom
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