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Eislen
Member since April 23, 2012
Member for 14 years, 1 month
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Occupancy and lesser
atrocity,
thrown eccentricities.
My wheel is thick,
and the mile is wicked,
(burberry light frownings,
unicorn drownings)
In umber steerage
I heel!
elixir parties rush,
and the club crush.
"into the rushing beast of the night
sucked up by that great dragon to split
with my life with no flag,
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no belly,
no cry."
A Sexton Qoute from
ALL MY PRETTY ONES
Eislen 2011
Eislen’s timeline
- April 2022
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23 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- April 2017
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23 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2013
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23 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2012
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23 Sat
- April 2012
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29 SunReceived a critique
on sub rent from @Candlewitch
"A very stirring piece! Especially this: "into the rushing beast of the night sucked up by that great dragon to split with my life with no flag, no belly, no cry." always, Cat" -
26 ThuFirst publication
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26 Thu
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26 ThuCritiqued
"Ellada, Ellada" by @paul
"from ships at sea! that it took vast sums of fortune to build and corruption even then was hissed at however monuments are not nations set with stone just the edifice like all ideologies of fortune and famine the hard t…" -
26 ThuCritiqued
"perfectly pleasing" by @kittymchale
"Canadian and international Literature I had a heck of a time in school but the language was music took me forever to get here at this old age I congratulate you on your abilities now! But here on Neopoet we can offer ea…" -
26 ThuCritiqued
"perfectly pleasing" by @kittymchale
""your breath was as water all brine and regrets and a promise to beg that I'll never forget.." suggestion only on line work "The pearls you roll to me swallow the floor and now all forgotten with nothing much more.." fo…" -
26 ThuFirst critique offered
on "perfectly pleasing" (since unpublished) by @kittymchale
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23 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 3 days later.
About Me
Been crafting poetry since my mid thirties.
A friend told me about this site and I am
happy to be able to write here when I find
time from my part time jobs, shopping and
raising a family.
Location: Eastern
Orderwine
Moodswing
Sylvia Plath
Virginia Woolf
Taya
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