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Dunni Ebenco
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TONIGHT
TONIGHT
The vibes of Nile's night
the twerking of twilight
the pleas of pleasure
the cold caresses of the wind
the mounting smile of the moon
bedazzle me, tonight
Take me to the journey of pleasure
let me be the horse of your ride
the soft mattress of your comfort
the warmth hands of your massage
bewitch me, tonight
Don't spare me, back and forth
drive me to the realms have never been
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I'm the body of your conveyance
to the empire of satisfaction
I'm the soothing ointment of your soul
the two in one on the path of ectasy
under sheets of blackness with
the staring eyes of the sky.
Dunni Ebenco
Dunni Ebenco’s timeline
- May 2023
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04 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2022
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25 WedReceived a critique
on TONIGHT from @Candlewitch
"the twerking of twilight (instead of twerking, try "twinkling" ) Take me to the journey of pleasure (Take me on the journey of pleasure) the warmth hands of your massage (the warm hands) drive me to the realms have neve…" -
25 WedReceived a critique
on MY MOTHER from @Candlewitch
"The greatest in the realm of gods& goddesses (needs a space after & and gods) the girdle that guards& guides me in the famished road of this cosmos (missing space after "guards") I liked these lines best: My body of con…" -
25 Wed
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24 TueReceived a critique
on CULTURE OF SILENCE from @Geezer
"with some of what Candlewitch says. I understand the reference to [Usband], that is saying that the two of [us] in matrimony. [her face made up by the punches of fury] relates to the swollen bruises, [instead of make-up…" -
24 TueReceived a critique
on CULTURE OF SILENCE from @Candlewitch
"in this line: "Raped by rascals in rapid succession" try (ruffians instead of rascals) The punchbag of her cursed Us-band (punching bag)(what is Us-band?) her face made up by the punches of fury (her face, swollen by th…" -
14 Sat
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14 SatReceived a critique
on NOT NAKED from @Candlewitch
"I like the title and your language usage. this poem has lovely flow through. my favorite lines are: people are my garments of honour that speak the diction of love. *hugs, Cat" -
14 SatReceived a critique
on NOT NAKED from @Huzzy king
"I think the pattern is a little inconsistent. Beautiful ending it has however. Nice work all together." -
14 Sat
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05 ThuReceived a critique
on MY MOTHER from @Obadiah Grey
"Hiya, bimbo. Nice to meet you! I just love this African poetry, its a world away from the structured, staid, norm. Obi." -
04 WedFirst publication
MY MOTHER
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04 Wed
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04 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Dunni Ebenco is Bimbo Fadero's pseudonym. He is a graduate of Ekiti State University. He is a Poet, an Agripreneur and an Evangelist..He likes reading Niyi Osundare, Femi Osofisan and Tanure Ojaide's works. He likes listening to the music of the African folklorist singer, Beautiful Nubia. He hopes to publish his first collection of poetry this year.
Location: South West/ Nigeria
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