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Dr_Jeebs
Member since June 10, 2012
Member for 13 years, 11 months
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‘Sap’-iosexual his was for girth not wit that bit of ‘Junk in the trunk’,
Luscious chunk of deciduous wood,
Pulling a leaf out of a fools scalp, He said, “Lettuce marry.’’,
“Wood you Maple take me as ‘your- lawnfully’ weeded hand...to prune and to mow, till dirt do us part ”
See, he seeded right...and soon they were joined in ‘holly’ ma‘tree’mony
Tree and man before Satyr, men, and trees;
3 ‘carrot’ ‘almond’ ring... Knots tied around girdles,
“Ouroboros” Knitting vows on dotted lines;
‘Fern’- in embers in old logbook”
“Together forever”.
They say, “It’s the things we do for love” Padre says, “It’s the thing we do for log.”
Poets say they can die for love “Can you die for log, Padre?”
“Probably in a poem”
Bouquet, Bouquet
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Disconcerting!
Bride’s sister flung in air like a piece of clothing
“All you single ladies!”
Touché.
Row-mance.
Life is hard in a ‘corn-dorm’ Square ‘roots’ in round pegs
Tree, lumberjack at loggerheads
“She stepped tom-a‘toes’ ”...“Where did you po-ta‘toes’?”
“Onion” head... ‘mush’-room there...“If I ‘cashew.’!”
‘Fowl’ play.
Every inch of pain nailed to this coffin, layers of bruises concealed by lacquer finishing
Like lies foundation tries to makeup, ‘Stigma’ borne in ‘style’
Padre was a ‘nut’ case, a ‘thorn’ in the ‘stem’.
Nature’s call
Here, friends gather like dark clouds
Neither for Padre nor the tree he loved
They pay their last respect to this woman whose body now lay motionless like a log
Why didn’t she say something?...Why didn’t she run?
Dr_Jeebs’s timeline
- June 2022
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10 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- May 2022
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02 Mon
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02 MonReceived a critique
on Follow Me from @Candlewitch
"thank you so very much for your explanation. I will read it again. *hugs, Cat" -
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02 Mon
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01 SunReceived a critique
on Follow Me from @Candlewitch
"I'm sorry, but I don't understand the poem. I'm sure the fault is mine. keep writing and welcome! *hugs, Cat" - April 2022
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- October 2021
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12 TueReceived a critique
on May In April from @Obadiah Grey
"After reading your back catalogue, I can't help but wonder where you've been since 2012, what wonderful occurrences has happened to you to promote such a change of style. Loved it mate. Obi." -
11 MonReceived a critique
on May In April from @Geezer
"this piece is about a female DJ or talk-show host on the radio. I can't figure the correlation of the title to the story. Your language use is pretty fair, however, some of the lines did not connect for me. The pace was…" -
11 Mon
- June 2017
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10 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2013
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22 SatReceived a critique
on God, Please let the bus come from @Ian.T
"My comment is on the other poem with the same name and write, Yours Ian.T" -
10 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
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- August 2012
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16 ThuCritiqued
"Sanctuary" by @judyanne
"Hello judyanne, I really love your poem, If you don't mind I will like to share this at a reading, with of-course your permission. I promise to mention to my audience that it's from far away Australia. I can't relate wi…" -
16 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Sanctuary" by @judyanne
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10 FriNew follower
@Ian.T
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10 Fri
- July 2012
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16 Mon
- June 2012
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12 TueFirst publication
For A Friend Like You
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12 Tue
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10 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
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