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drewdionp
Member since August 31, 2012
Member for 13 years, 9 months
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The Fallen one
I am merely dirt, camouflaged as sand.
A snake-like twerp,
spreading poison
at the touch of my hand.
Commonly confused with bile
I hide behind the vilest of smiles.
I'm nothing if not a plague.
One so bitter, so rancid, so overstayed.
Wretched and putrid a few of my names.
A perfect storm that is sorrow
mixed with some shame.
When Blended together,
makes a hurricane no one man can weather.
I am all that is hate.
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The purest of disease.
Unchallenged by Fate.
I rule with such ease.
The creator of evil.
I am the owner of fear.
I Slither with a whisper
that leave sin in your ear.
I am all that is Unholy.
to heaven I am the goalie
I am the blackest cancer.
The once holy true wrong answer.
I am the rawest definition of imposter.
The reason the good die young
while the wicked prosper.
I am to God what base is to treble.
I'm the ruler of Hell.
I am the Devil.
drewdionp’s timeline
- August 2022
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31 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- August 2017
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31 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2016
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21 SunReceived a critique
on The Fallen one from @judyanne
"Can I suggest a small format change to give it a more traditional look? I am merely dirt, camouflaged as sand. A snake-like twerp, spreading poison at the touch of my hand. Commonly confused with bile I hide behind the…" -
20 SatFirst critique offered
on "A tale of Dandelion" (since unpublished) by @Vivovon
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20 SatReceived a critique
on The Fallen one from @Vivovon
"Congratulations for your various colorful achievements. Feel free to roam around in the human world and I hope to see you this Halloween. Thank you. (I edited my earlier comment)." -
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31 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2012
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31 FriFirst publication
My Falt (since unpublished)
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31 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
My name is Drew I am 27 years old I've recently been diagnosed with primary Progressive multiple sclerosis I've been a skateboarder for 15 years unfortunately has slowed down since the diagnosis I am not the best speller don't have great grammar but I love to write !
Location: USA
Favorite Poets
Ronald McDonald
Recent Work
The Fallen one
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