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Dreamer of the odd 2294
Member since July 4, 2012
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I love you daddy..
I was stained by your black heart,
And stabbed by your dagger like glare.
Torn by your deep nails.
And drained by your forever thursty feelings of anger,
You forced me to hide behind these gray lines,
And to have my sorrows appear,
Tears often occupied my face,
But that's the way you liked it, huh?
You've left me to drown in such worries,
You've endlessly came to me for sympathy,
Don't you even feel guilt?,
But you always come back for more while my wounds try to heal,
but such matters aside
I love you daddy.
Dreamer of the odd 2294’s timeline
- July 2022
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04 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
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04 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2013
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04 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2012
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26 WedReceived a critique
on I love you daddy.. from @weirdelf
"When you have been done harm the other person needs to be made accountable or legal/moral action taken against them, Some African tribes say "it takes a tribe to raise a family", so true. American "family values" are a…" -
25 TueReceived a critique
on I love you daddy.. from @Ian.T
"One of the things that most people will shrink from, it is always the same in this day and age. OH! Poor child shouldn't something be done and that is it, never any positive action. It goes on mostly behind closed doors…" -
24 Mon
- July 2012
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16 MonReceived a critique
on My Momma's Spagetti from @Geezer
"of a time long ago, when I had this very experience. Sometimes we just don't know when anything might be something. Welcome to Neo. As Ian says; there are many here who will help and encourage you. Please take advantage…" -
15 SunCritiqued
"Ilusiones [Spanish-English]" by @Geremia
"I originally speak English. i just wanted to test my Spanish, a little . I seem to have gotten a tad rusty at it lately. But i truly do like your poetry. Its different from most i have read and i like that you had some…" -
14 SatReceived a critique
on My Momma's Spagetti from @Rula
"Hope you are good at cooking same as poetry..lol enjoyed it ..Welcome to Neopoet." -
14 Sat
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13 FriReceived a critique
on My Momma's Spagetti from @weirdelf
"It's good to be retarded and silly, in Australia we a have a saying "dags have more fun". I do, however, look forward to seeing what else you can do," -
13 FriReceived a critique
on My Momma's Spagetti from @Ian.T
"Firstly welcome to Neopoet site and I hope all will look after you here. It can be hard sometimes, my Grand Daughter has written on this site and there are workshops on going so ask for help with one of the poets that r…" -
13 FriCritiqued
"Ilusiones [Spanish-English]" by @Geremia
"Me gusta este poema. tiene ese sentimiento oscuro, pero suave al mismo. tiene un enfoque muy limpio y atractivo. Y contiene misterio, pero no lo suficiente para asustar al lector. gran trabajo. Me encanta su poesía y le…" -
13 FriFirst critique offered
on "Ilusiones [Spanish-English]" by @Geremia
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13 FriFirst publication
My Momma's Spagetti
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13 Fri
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04 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 9 days later.
About Me
About me
I've never been one to describe myself. I'm just me, i guess. i don't really know my style or personality. i just know the basics. Like, i'm 15. i have red hair and blue eyes. I'm a girl. i like to knit and sew. i play flute and piccolo. I've taken professional drawing classes, that kind of stuff. I'm not gonna go spilling my entire life's story out to total strangers. That's how people get stalked and kidnapped and all that criminal crap. So to all the fugitives out there, good luck finding me. teehee.
PS: THAT'S ME IN THE MIDDLE OF THE PICTURE. yeah .. i'm a ginger
Location: georgia, USA
Favorite Poets
Robert Frost
Bill Holm
Lloyd Schwartz
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