dreamcaramel

Member since September 7, 2024

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Flame

Posted Sep 7, 2024 · 5 lines · 1 critiques

it was a beautiful flame
and it had to burn
the paper with our names
it had to wash away

each side of the coin shall always remain

September 2025
07 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2024
08 Sun

Received a critique
on Flame from @Geezer
"drawn to this but wish that you had added a little more to the scenario. I got a flash of a relationship gone bad, but not why or how, although the last line, suggests that personality issues were at hand. No matter, I…"
07 Sat

First publication
Flame
07 Sat

Posted a poem
Flame
"it was a beautiful flame"
Open thread 5 lines
07 Sat

Critiqued
"Unkind" by @Kelly Ann Wilson
"beautiful!"
07 Sat

First critique offered
on "Unkind" by @Kelly Ann Wilson
07 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About me

i am a romantic and magical kind of writer. musicality is my art! <3

Location: Texas

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