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DreamBug
Member since November 2, 2020
Member for 5 years, 7 months
A poem of love.
You have my heart and soul, darling,
You're the Odysseus to Penelope
The Heracles to my Megara
The Mark Anthony to my Cleopatra
The Napoleon to my Josephine
The Pierre to my Marie, darling.
You're my world,
My sun, moon, stars, and air.
You are like a ghost,
Haunting me with your love with every step I take,
Never leaving, till death do we part.
And even so,
Until our souls smolder out into ashes and dimmed sparks,
Our flaming love will forever be joint.
DreamBug’s timeline
- November 2025
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02 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2023
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21 Sun
- January 2023
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26 Thu
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26 Thu
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26 ThuReceived a critique
on Colors from @Candlewitch
"it is nice to meet you! all of your colors are in the brighter spectrum. you are probably an upbeat person and poet. a good read. thank you for sharing. *hugs, Cat" -
26 ThuReceived a critique
on Colors from @Rosewood Apothecary
"We could do a few tweaks to make it super tight but it’s fairly smooth as is. Well done, Tim" -
25 Wed
- September 2022
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21 WedReceived a critique
on Fantine (A Les Miserables poem.) from @Geezer
"Is it about a prostitute that plies her trade along the waterfront? I'm not sure about how she winds up in a hospital; is it because of the one man that spares her soul? Does he give her a disease that puts her there or…" -
20 Tue
- November 2021
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02 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2020
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07 Sat
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06 Fri
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06 FriReceived a critique
on Incapability. from @c lynn brooks
"sent you a private message regarding your poem I see potential in your work" -
06 FriReceived a critique
on Incapability. from @tyro
"The poem is not very clear to me but very intriguing, because of those philosophical issues on how to decipher life." -
04 WedFirst publication
Incapability. (since unpublished)
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02 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
About Me
I'm a teenage artist and student, I used to be called Phoebe but I currently am called Jamie or Bug. I'm not often online, but I hop on sometimes. I quite like musicals, rock, and renaissance art. Please contact me if you need anything.
Location: Washington, United States, USA
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