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Dr Rotimi
Member since December 28, 2012
Member for 13 years, 5 months
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Cryptorchid
Coward!
You brandish your bloodless sword
in the congregation of the feeble
and you dance naked
in the gathering of the blind.
You chant your victory songs
in the assembly of the deaf
and tell of your virility
in the beds of a thousand crones
War!
Your tail is lost between your legs
and your baritone thaw into murmur
with eloquence in shadowy places.
Oh man!
When shall your testes descend?
Dr Rotimi’s timeline
- December 2022
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28 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2017
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28 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2013
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28 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2013
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14 Mon
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13 SunReceived a critique
on Cryptorchid from @Nordic cloud
"Is this a rant against war? I thought it new, a new way of putting things a kind of conjuring trick of tumbled thoughts around a theme. Otherwise it is a kind of maniac out on the prowl, his penis brandished, and like m…" -
12 Sat
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11 Fri
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11 FriCritiqued
"Inevitable" by @sueb
"a great piece. the word usage is great and it reads with emotions of great pain for the things that will be lost. it pains to love and lost! beautiful poem!" -
11 Fri
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08 TueReceived a critique
on VISIONS OF FREEDOM from @themoonman
"A warm welcome to Neopoet ! This piece is truly an excellent read although there is almost always room for improvement. The title; in my opinion you could be more inventive there, it does relate well to the theme but it…" -
08 TueReceived a critique
on VISIONS OF FREEDOM from @Ian.T
"A very good read here, the theme was solid, I shall wait for the poets that are aware of correct form to comment further, Yours Ian.T" -
08 TueCritiqued
"You Should Sleep. I Should Do A Lot of Things." by @emogothgirl
"wow! this is a beautiful piece. the pure longing and yearning of a lonesome heart yearning for that one person who truly fills her, satisfies her and completes her. Lovely Poem!" -
08 TueFirst critique offered
on "You Should Sleep. I Should Do A Lot of Things." by @emogothgirl
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07 MonReceived a critique
on VISIONS OF FREEDOM from @BlueDemon77
"You have a pure vision of nobility and I agree very much with it. Beautiful, spiritual poem. Ron" -
07 Mon
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03 Thu
- December 2012
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31 Mon
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29 Sat
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29 Sat
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28 FriFirst publication
THE CHICK
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28 Fri
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28 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
am a passionate poet. loved poetry from nursery school days in the '80s and started writing in the early 2000s.
i like to meet new poets published and unpublished and love to exchange ideas and get their constructive and sincere opinions about my writing.
i hope to get published sometime in the nearest future.
Location: Ibadan, Oyo State Nigeria, USA
Favorite Poets
wole Soyinka
Niyi Osundare
John Keats
T S Eliot
Samuel Taylor Coleridge.
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