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DH
do HI FI ja HAIKU
Member since February 1, 2017
Member for 9 years, 4 months
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squid ink stains novel / mirror phrase Calypso shark / pirate ship coins found.
do HI FI ja HAIKU’s timeline
- February 2022
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01 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2018
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01 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2017
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13 MonReceived a critique
on 0521200013.0528pm from @themoonman
"You can edit your poem and it will enable a review section where the original and the edited can be viewed along side one another ... pretty cool feature." -
01 WedReceived a critique
on 0521200013.0528pm from @themoonman
"Like has already been mentioned, traditional haiku was normally about nature with the 17 syllable count ... but like everything else, it has evolved. The essence of haiku is "cutting" (kiru).[1] This is often represente…" -
01 WedReceived a critique
on 0521200013.0528pm from @Sparrow
"Your write is spot on for the number of syllables, but this is a Senryu, a Haiku is about the four seasons squid ink stains novel mirror phrase Calypso shark pirate ship coins found. Yours Ian.." -
01 WedReceived a critique
on 0521200013.0528pm from @brittle light
"are you the chief of Haiku police? syllables are not directly correlated to the "on" of Japanese you write the way you want, others, as they want. All your Haiku may be beautiful and brilliant, but that has nothing to d…" -
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01 WedPosted a poem
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About Me
About me
Amateur poet+ creative writing hobby I discovered Richard Kostelanetz in a jazz poetry anthology. What I did was take his interconnected syllable words and haiku meter and a new form was created. I have 20 themed symmetry poems. I break down each syllabled line to show the individual words. I am searching for other experimental poets like myself.
Location: Lakewood,Ohio USA
Favorite Poets
Laurence Lieberman and his Eros at the World Kite Pageant + W D Snodgrass+ ____ Schuyler "LITHIUM" + Nikki Giovanni + Maya Angelou. Harry Chapin wrote some great lyrics that stand alone as great poems.
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