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Del
Member since October 19, 2024
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The Moon
The Moon cried an onyx for me
knowing that in spac I'm free
looking for the right answer of life
because I know where I belong
I looked up in question at the stars
trying to figure out who you are
I saw my tears in the moon's reflection
and know that there is some fear in my eyes
I love you so much my heart aches
but the fear is building inside me
please try and understand
I'm the product of the Moon
and please it is too soon
I'm on the edge of loosing my dreams
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all the threads of the tapestry is unravelling
and now there is nothing left to do
As you look at the Full Moon
see my tears and now you'll know
I can sense my fear falling like snow
Del’s timeline
- April 2026
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21 Tue
- October 2025
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19 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2024
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19 Tue
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18 MonReceived a critique
on The Other Side of Silence from @Candlewitch
"I love the title which you have given this poem. The title drew me in. my favorite lines are: Listen to the voices of the planets try to find the noises of the stars between Jupiter and Mars you'll find the other side o…" -
18 Mon
- October 2024
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23 WedReceived a critique
on Crystal Mask from @Candlewitch
"in this line: it's a curse (bestow) upon me .....use (bestowed) instead. In this line: (passed) mistakes I have learned from.... use: (past) Is this line missing a word? yet every forbidden falls into my fatal slumber (…" -
23 Wed
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19 SatFirst publication
Hello Stranger (since unpublished)
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19 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I have been writing poetry since 1997 when I finished high school.
Location: South Africa, ZAF
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