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Deidrejoy
Member since January 12, 2019
Member for 7 years, 5 months
Summer Eve Musk
In the darkened eye of our suspended night
Your aura is moving into mine
Begin the rite...pull me close
Ancient steps in a newfound yearning
You are my dream of a dream unguarded
I will bend to your unwritten song
Love me as we move together
Clothed in kisses that shiver with truth
Forfeit your guards and fortresses
Swallow the candle and draw down the moon
Lay me down on the summer eve musk
Fall with me fall into me fall
Time moving slower than honey
Weave yourself into my pale arabesque
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Thread your breath into my body
Paint me with your infinite secrets and wine
We will dare to invent our own visions
Laugh as we tumble into the stream
We meet each other inside our drowning
Fusing desire to each rhythmic echo
Fingertips soft and wet kisses deep
Holding nerve edges flittering gold
Abandoning thought to our tongue of sighs
Describing the push/pull of our melody
Burn your fears and pull me close
Fall with me fall for me fall
Love all your sublime imperfections
Pull me down to the underground floor
My alabaster will open, exquisitely bruised
Crushed by the force of your heady slick scents
Synchronise the last moments of now
Etch your name deep in my bones
His fingers opened the soft, ripe fruit
Spilled the juices, revealing the glistening flesh
Once the red seeds passed her lips
Persephone was fated to stay
And she smiled...
Deidrejoy’s timeline
- January 2024
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12 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2020
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12 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on Summer Eve Musk from @weirdelf
"You need to give feedback to others to keep getting it. We are willing volunteers but our poems need critique too." - January 2019
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21 MonReceived a critique
on Summer Eve Musk from @zebra
"OMG that scintillates in language and sensuality A brave beautiful writing of Venus unveiled An erotic surrealist witch swirl from a womans heart Your body a storm voluptuous, an erotic lucidity ...Yehaaa your poem swee…" -
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12 SatFirst publication
Birthing Butterflies
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12 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I’m a visual artist and writer
Location: Vic, Australia, AUS
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