Dawdler

Member since March 6, 2025

Member for 1 year, 2 months

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First Date (haiku)

Posted Mar 6, 2025 · 3 lines · 3 critiques

our appetizer
consumed watching you nibble
whets my appetite

March 2026
06 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
April 2025
15 Tue

New follower
@Rula
15 Tue

Critiqued
"They Call The Wind" by @Rula
"Hello Rula, your poem is indicattive of the spirit within the woman I met long ago in a different and sorely missed forum. There is a definitve difference in your use of Nglish that pleases me to no end. I saw the poten…"
15 Tue

First critique offered
on "They Call The Wind" by @Rula
March 2025
07 Fri

Received a critique
on First Date (haiku) from @Lavender
"Hello, Dawdler, Welcome, and thank you for the big smile. If this was a long time ago, it sounds like a very romantic, fond memory... Thank you, Lavender"
06 Thu

Received a critique
on First Date (haiku) from @Geezer
"has suggested, this is senryu rather than haiku, in that it does not contain references to seasons or weather and is of personal nature. Nicely done though. ~ Geezer. ."
06 Thu

Received a critique
on First Date (haiku) from @Candlewitch
"a good example of a haiku (or senryu?) Welcome to Neopoet, it is nice to meet you! I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. always, Cat"
06 Thu

First publication
First Date (haiku)
06 Thu

Posted a poem
First Date (haiku)
"our appetizer"
Open thread 3 lines
06 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About me

Still learning and growing. Has taken too long to get here

Location: USA MICHIGAN

Posted: 6 March, 2025

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